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  1. BenJepheneT

    First time writing smut harem

    ah, i see. i'll look into that. and as for the clunky dialogue, I think it's attributed more towards the world-building. it's something Im trying out; dropping jarring, awkward dialogue like these as odd hints that precede a bigger reveal. and when readers reread it, they might pick up on...
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    top 5 need for speed vroomvrooms (gone wrong, cops involved, Stalin revived, LS swapped)

    The Most Wanted M3's great, but I've seen someone put Ryan Cooper's Pro Street livery on their 180sx before and let me tell you; seeing a legend's one thing, but seeing someone acknowledging an underrated icon on their own JDM car is something else.
  3. BenJepheneT

    top 5 need for speed vroomvrooms (gone wrong, cops involved, Stalin revived, LS swapped)

    and my most regrettable thread too whoever pulled this out of the gutter I'm putting a hit out on your kneecaps
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    top 5 need for speed vroomvrooms (gone wrong, cops involved, Stalin revived, LS swapped)

    ah this was a classic Back when I was heavily retarded Still retarded now, but worse, back then
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    I found my younger cousin's secret Facebook and she's been calling herself "Loli in Heat <3" in...

    I found my younger cousin's secret Facebook and she's been calling herself "Loli in Heat <3" in her bio She's 14
  6. BenJepheneT

    Writing Which move sounds more powerful?

    Dream World: - sounds lame - generic movie-in-a-movie type title - awkward to say out loud Total Shutdown: - what the fuck that's so cool - bro it sounds like a 1980s Ridley Scott film - I just shaved my balls and after reading the title it's starting to grow hair again wtf
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    What I love and hate about the Isekai/portal fantasy genre. *RANT*

    I've long since given up on finding good isekai to read. If a good one comes along, I'll acknowledge it. Other than that, isekai to me is basically like porn, just without the jacking off. It's got decent women and wish fulfillment. It's literally the McDonald's of literature.
  8. BenJepheneT

    Writing Prompt Describe the girl's feelings/thoughts

    "There used to be a god, and I killed him," she gleamed.
  9. BenJepheneT

    First time writing smut harem

    LET'S FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOO Is there any particular reason you can pin for this? For the most part, I feel like the dialogue here's just about on the level, if not a tad lower than the other chapters. Does this drop in quality persist throughout the other chapters? It does feel like that, yes...
  10. BenJepheneT

    @Paul_Tromba I see you liking this post boy I'll have you know we still have unfinished business...

    @Paul_Tromba I see you liking this post boy I'll have you know we still have unfinished business that I'll be dropping into your inbox soon enough
  11. BenJepheneT

    What questions did you have?

    Why isn't my cover accepted? My novel isn't in latest releases, what's going on? My latest chapter isn't in latest updates, what's going on? When's the best time to post? Guys, have you heard of show-don't-tell? Why do you guys like Harem? Why do you guys like Gender-Bender?
  12. BenJepheneT

    Ben™'s dumpster fire-full of abs, lewds and bewbs

    Did cover for @T.K._Paradox's upcoming story Drift Hero Go bookmark that shit now https://www.scribblehub.com/series/446099/drift-hero/ I better see you reading it when it's out
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    I did the cover for @T.K._Paradox's upcoming novel. If you like superheroes like how they used...

    I did the cover for @T.K._Paradox's upcoming novel. If you like superheroes like how they used to do it before the MCU bookmark that shit now
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    The Last to Comment Wins

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    The Last to Comment Wins

  16. BenJepheneT

    How do you write a morally questionable character?

    There are many ways you can divulge moral integrity in a story but one of the easiest way to do so is through situational convenience. Let me give a hypothetical: there are two paths standing between MC and a million dollars. MC has a sister who's dying of cancer and she needs that million...
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    The Last to Comment Wins

  18. BenJepheneT

    Ben™'s dumpster fire-full of abs, lewds and bewbs

    These were early concepts before I mailed down the tamer look he has now The tone of the story was originally gonna be a whole lot edgier
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    POV: angry tomboy gf complaining about her day before having the dirtiest sandwich seggs with...

    POV: angry tomboy gf complaining about her day before having the dirtiest sandwich seggs with you on bed catch it all on The Problem Store
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