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  1. Hsinat

    Any PvsZ player?

    I used to love it, but it costed too many suns that I barely had any suns left for defence. Nonetheless, the one of the best combo for the trade mill level. I don't know anything about the EA thing. Could you please elaborate?
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    Webnovel Feedback Roasts For the Fearless

    You cooked better than my mum ever did to me.
  3. Hsinat

    The Last to Comment Wins

    I am still standing
  4. Hsinat

    The Last to Comment Wins

    Woah
  5. Hsinat

    Any PvsZ player?

    I used to play this game a lot to the point that I defeated the whole game at the age of 4-5. I wonder if there is anybody out on the internet who still plays this game? If yes then what's your favourite plant and strategies? Mine is Hypno-shroom.
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    The Last to Comment Wins

    but i am kinda winning
  7. Hsinat

    The Last to Comment Wins

    no offence
  8. Hsinat

    The Last to Comment Wins

    why do you all sound so old?
  9. Hsinat

    Feedback.....(Not valid)

    This prologue is fascinating and emotional right from the start. The main character, Natsumi, is relatable because they're lonely and wishing to be being transported to a fantasy world, which a lot of people can relate to from anime or games. Natsumi’s struggle is the highlight here. They want...
  10. Hsinat

    First 10 chapters up [Queer Fantasy]

    Congrats, buddy!
  11. Hsinat

    I need feedback

    1- Intro seemed like a pretty cool in my head and I wanted to be creative in attracting my readers, but I didn't think of the consequences. Thanks for taking a note of it! 2- Really? I have been using Wordtune as my grammar checker, and it would put an underline under those dialogues and...
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    I need feedback

    Hello, everyone! This is my very first attempt at writing a novel, and since English isn’t my native language, I would greatly appreciate your honest feedback. I’m aware there may be areas that need improvement, so please let me know how I can improve both my writing and the story itself. Your...
  13. Hsinat

    I will tell you when and why I stopped reading your story.

    Alright! Quite the challenge. Here's mine -book
  14. Hsinat

    The Last to Comment Wins

    nope!
  15. Hsinat

    The Last to Comment Wins

    Nah, I would win.
  16. Hsinat

    According to your childhood, which were THE OUT OF THIS WORLD cartoon series ever?

    FR! I used to be obsessed with that show.
  17. Hsinat

    First 10 chapters up [Queer Fantasy]

    I’ve read the first one too, and I can see what you mean about the information being presented differently. I think both approaches have their strengths, but this book’s focus on new characters gave it a fresh perspective for me. Nonetheless, I agree with your points. Your point stands and I...
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