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I want novels that actually make you FEEL the world. I know, I know it sounds like some writing advice but I find that in a lot of novels, after some time the atmosphere just falls apart for some reason. (Not from SH is fine, I can search)

1. [In the center of Taijin, near the sheltered coast of Meru,] I have no idea what these two words mean. 2. [lacquer and cinnabar. Its pointed roofs were topped with golden Fenghuang.] Should've added footnotes? 3. Conversations: The conversation needs some indicators of who's talking outside...

Shouldn't who the villain like... matter? e.g. If the villain is a teacher, you can make him act off near the students (smile too wide, too kind, too bitchy, etc. etc.)

Too lazy to feedback chapters, will give overview. 1. Grammar mistake on your synopsis. (should be {companions, Frau} instead of {companions , Frau)) 2. The 0th chapter made me feel a non-professional vibe, might turn off some people. 3. As rookieqw mentioned: A lot of grammar mistakes...

Then... shouldn't you just go and read LotM? It's probably going to give you some ideas ngl

Actually, I can agree to that. Using AI will make authors pump out works much faster. However, frequent use of AI gets you dumber and dumber as an author, until one day, stories are completely generated by AI. Ngl, I think that in a few years time, AI WILL get good enough for ordinary people...

too lazy, got you fam + It is not supposed to take over creative works? I can understand AI for text based RPGs, but for novels... why?

Hmm... Tell us what's unique about your story (other than night scenes) and I might become one of your readers.

What if I'm neither :blob_evil:

Damn this thing sounds so interesting, does anyone know a story with this premise?

No offense, but you should go to Story Feedback Forum Page On another note, I'll at least give my first impressions of the synopsis

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I alone am the winning one

Depends. If there is a time limit and I can see how many are going, I might consider it. (Too little and we'll all just die, too much and we'll kill each other). ALTHOUGH if, and ONLY IF they introduce a superhuman system where you can get stronger by killing, eating, etc. (like, if you go, you...

Both is fine, thanks for the recommendation :blob_popcorn: Finished reading Kumo already, it was amazing :blob_uwu:

Damn, that sucks. Thanks for the recommendation though, seems fun to read :blob_melt:

Heya! Really bored right now, so I want to read some reincarnated into a monster novels, preferably those where it is NOT a litRPG (I swear every one of them are litRPG for some reason) Any recommendations will be greatly appreciated :blob_evil_two:

Damn that's long, how do you even make your readers remember them naturally?

+link your story for convenience sake