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  1. MakBow

    My MC as a Jack of All-Trades

    So is my novel, the MC is a slime, and, in my universe, slimes are well known for being able to adapt to anything as well as copy anything to a mediocre extent or at best average through outright or clever ways, but of course, he's very simple minded and of course, isn't going to really do...
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    Besides writing, what's the best way to improve as a writer?

    Ag Agreed(y):blob_cookie: I would go as far to say I prefer criticism if anything. I don't give a damn about glaze or praise because they can only do so much. For me, criticism is the best kind of glaze out there, because these people think they can spend their time to dissect what you made. I...
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    Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It)

    No, no. You gave good feedback. These are things I need, so don't feel you offended me because you gave me an honest critique. :blob_cookie:
  4. MakBow

    To Those Who Write Fight Scenes...

    (Dialogue, Action and Metaphorical Description)
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    To Those Who Write Fight Scenes...

    1. What is the hardest thing about writing a fight scene? 2. What do you do to make sure there is a good balance? (Dialogue, Action and Metaphorical Description) As someone who struggles to write good fight scenes, advice is very beneficial.
  6. MakBow

    What Genre Do You Enjoy Writing The Most?

    Ah, the classic 'YOU, are not important', love that stuff. I can't help but add Cosmic Horror in my own novel. It just FEEELS right:blob_no:
  7. MakBow

    What Genre Do You Enjoy Writing The Most?

    1. I do agree more soul crushing love is needed, unless I'm just ignorant. 2. I haven't read any Russian Novel no. 3. Don't worry, a lot of things out of context are cringe :blobthumbsup:. It just means you enjoy writing.
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    Feedback For my Third Person Perspective (I Feel I'm Buns At It)

    So, for the passion project of the novel, I'm trying to train my third person perspective and make it better. (I've been writing in First Person for two long) If you're willing to give feedback on both the prologue and the first chapter, I will appreciate it. You can also tell me what you...
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    What Genre Do You Enjoy Writing The Most?

    What kind of love are we talking? BL? GL? Doomed Yaoi/Yuri?
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    What Genre Do You Enjoy Writing The Most?

    Oh! That's nice too.
  11. MakBow

    What Genre Do You Enjoy Writing The Most?

    What's SoL?
  12. MakBow

    What Genre Do You Enjoy Writing The Most?

    Pretty simple question really My Answer: Action, Fantasy, Isekai
  13. MakBow

    Do people here like dungeon crawlers and tower climbers?

    I have no intention on getting into numbers. After all, the fiction is mainly to train my third person-perspective and help train my capability to write fights better. Whether it gets viewership or not doesn't truly matter to me as in the end, it's for me. It's also me doing something I haven't...
  14. MakBow

    Do people here like dungeon crawlers and tower climbers?

    Never. He's a baby slime. WAAAY Too young for that :blobrofl:
  15. MakBow

    Do people here like dungeon crawlers and tower climbers?

    I mean, it's not like the towers are going to be tall, maybe about 5, 6 floors and then they return back to ground, same with dungeons. Overall, its just be opening more opportunities for me to make hype fights
  16. MakBow

    Do people here like dungeon crawlers and tower climbers?

    It's just something I want to know as I'm writing a second novel to use as practice to train my third-person perspective since I suck at it as well as being purely for fun and to keep my mind fresh to prevent writer's block to do my more active novel. It's meant to be a dark fantasy, gory...
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    Question for Writers with Ongoing Stories

    1. I don't. I just make sure stuff doesn't happen to fast as I have two stories ongoing, one more active, the other more for fun and training so its uploads will be when I want to post 2. I only plan the major players in the novel by writing the on a document. Everything else is just improvised...
  18. MakBow

    Power System For My Side(Fun & Third Person Training) Novel

    For the first question, no. They do not require each other, but they can help each other. A rune can act on its own, but with a seal, you can 'attach it' to the circle if you are far away, like a in games, if you step on a tile (Rune), the code (Seal) activates the door to open (Transmutation...
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    Power System For My Side(Fun & Third Person Training) Novel

    So, for my fun and training novel, this is going to be the power system which was inspired by game development (I take game development classes). I believe that this power system is simple, but it could be extremely diverse and versatile in how it could be used. What we thinking, what we...
  20. MakBow

    What story/series/movie inspired you to write?

    Simple. Danmachi.
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