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  1. MakBow

    MC Villain who is the Übermensch

    So, in my side novel that I write for more deep characters while I post my current, more surface level novel, I have this idea of my villain MC who I feel has a good basis for some peak writing, philosophical debates, etc. (Not that I think I'm good enough to execute them perfectly) He was a...
  2. MakBow

    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    Basically, yeah
  3. MakBow

    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    No, there is still a tribulation, it just doesn't come in the form of lighting always and it's not there to test you but outright kill you since the heavens don't want people to cultivate. The heavenly assassin as you call it is merely there to stop people from becoming true immortals once they...
  4. MakBow

    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    No, it has nothing to do with lightning
  5. MakBow

    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    Because I can make it tuff on my own :biggrin_s:
  6. MakBow

    So, I made this and I won't lie, it sounds tuff

    So, I decided to make this for my side cultivation novel, and I realize this is a perfect way to keep be able to rise the tensions while also giving strong people aura as well as making the heavens more involved in the plot than just being there for the sake of being there: Venerable...
  7. MakBow

    Power System I Made For Fun (I May Use It)

    I didn't say I will use it. It's not fanfiction. The system is INSPIRED by it. And you don't need to read the book since there is a wiki page about the system.
  8. MakBow

    Power System I Made For Fun (I May Use It)

    Oh , I know what it is. I'm talking about Gu Cultivation from Reverend Insanity. I know 100% what cultivation is and have wrote and read many cultivation xianxia novels. It's just I'm doing something different as many xianxia novels do
  9. MakBow

    Villian Protagonist

    I never said he kills people because he enjoys and even if that is true, think about it from the perspective of the victim. From their perspective, he is evil, even if there is reason behind it, it doesn't negate how evil something is. Similar to anti-heroes who do bad to commit to a great...
  10. MakBow

    Villian Protagonist

    Well, Fang Yuan is just a straight up villain, no matter which way you spin it, and he is extremely well written, even if you do want to say he is really just someone who had suffered the harshness of the Gu world and simply chose to adapt. At the end of the day Fang Yuan is just evil, no...
  11. MakBow

    Villian Protagonist

    Do you like em or hate em? Me personally, if they are good. I like when a villain protagonist has to go against the "Protagonist" of that era, being righteous and all that while the MC needs to be cold and cunny, a perfect foil to the 'MC' of the world. Only problem from what I see is that...
  12. MakBow

    Power System I Made For Fun (I May Use It)

    Since I'm someone that loves making power systems for fun (that I will use one day), I thought of this power system while reading multiple novels, learning about Gu from China, then learning about Gu Cultivation from Reverend Insanity, so tell me what you think: [Power System: Vermina...
  13. MakBow

    So I love making power systems for fun, Vermina Cultivation, my most ambitious one yet and most complicated one ever

    Since I'm someone that loves making power systems for fun (that I will use one day), I thought of this power system while reading multiple novels, learning about Gu from China, then learning about Gu Cultivation from Reverend Insanity, so tell me what you think: [Power System: Vermina...
  14. MakBow

    When writing slow burners...

    Do you ever feel like you just want to get to the next point in the story, but you HAVE to take things slow unless you risk ruining the pacing, especially when you're trying to write a slow burner?
  15. MakBow

    Would you read this once I post it?

    I'm pretty sure msot authors. You can't understand how to write unless you read other novels and media or watch it. Creators of content do in fact create as much as they consume, some maybe more than others, but they do regardless
  16. MakBow

    Would you read this once I post it?

    Ohhhhhhh! Well, if you ever intend to, warning, you may be VERY weirded out, and if you can't push past it to get to the real meat and bones, that's cool. Everyone has a tolerance level.
  17. MakBow

    Would you read this once I post it?

    It's literally a popular webnovel and anime, with a season coming this year. How could you not find it? What kind of outdated google are you using?
  18. MakBow

    Would you read this once I post it?

    it also goes by mushoku tensei, especially when he's a grown man mentally, simping over people not his mental age, but I can get past that, of course being a pervert too, a little too much
  19. MakBow

    Would you read this once I post it?

    Yeah, I've been reading Jobless Reincarnation to help me with this idea I'm going for since I know it has VERY flawed character. A little too flawed maybe, but hey...
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