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  1. MakBow

    World I Set up: How Rich you thinking?

    [Continents] As a result of the constant rise of dungeons, some continents merged and some separated, as a result, the 7 continents were transformed into 4 giant continents [Northern Continent] The northern continent is comprised of a total of 50 states that are quite large, with many kingdoms...
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    One Character Type I Hate & You Hate

    I hate this: I hate when the say they are one gender yet have no qualities of the gender they actually are. Limbus company is guilty of this. As much as I love it, DAMN do some women just look like dudes or vice versa like in fate. I literally thought the one who grips was a dude until I read...
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    Setting up Mystery novels is harder than I thought

    I've already set up my world with four major continents possessing many different kingdoms and towns as well as their own religions as well as having many, but I quickly realize just how hard it is to truly set everything up, especially since I'm not used to making so many characters, especially...
  4. MakBow

    I watched Wicked City movie

    Shiz weird AF. Like why was there so much S.3.X, like damn, it's literally 10%, 90% just straight butt and b00bs and hentai scenes. The female character was useful only at her first and latest fight, the fight in between that, she was straight useless, just: , like damn, she was just getting...
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    Most Horny Authors HERE

    Oh wow
  6. MakBow

    Does anybody have Trypophobia?

    Being honest, I'm fine with seeing it as long as it's not on skin. I can see it on anything else, but when it's on skin,
  7. MakBow

    Most Horny Authors HERE

    You read the title. Someone tell me... Who is the horniest author on this site?
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    God of Berserkers: I kill Pirates for a Living

    Dude, this should be in the story feedback thread or reader section, and you should put a link
  9. MakBow

    Vampire Vampire Hunter

    Yes. Vampire D, Hellsing, Blade, Sinners, and more but I forgot their names
  10. MakBow

    Vampire Vampire Hunter

    Yes. I'm a little prick who doesn't know what he wants to write. I don't know what I want to write, which is why I'm trying to discipline myself, which is hard.
  11. MakBow

    Vampire Vampire Hunter

    I'm not going to lie. I just want to write a simple, action-packed, fun, vampire hunter story in the medieval ages with edge, gore, and a character writing, simple character that aren't really deep, but good enough. I feel I overwhelm myself with big worlds when I'm not used to that yet, so I...
  12. MakBow

    Do it, the universe is testing your patience

    Do it, the universe is testing your patience
  13. MakBow

    Dealing with the Aftermath of the Demon King

    You know, I want to write a novel where the MC was the hero, but the demon king's influence still remains even after death as his presence has caused great suffering and turmoil and now he must focus on the small things that occurred because of his presence and shows just how ignorant he truly...
  14. MakBow

    Litrpg skill system

    Well, if you want MY perspective, not only is that too simple and barebones, but it sounds like you don't really need a system for that. Add some benefits related specifically to the system itself, like maybe you can combine the spells to create more powerful spells or something like that, I...
  15. MakBow

    Most Popular Yanderes

  16. MakBow

    What makes a Good Power System

    This is something I've thought about for a long time as I've read LOTM, Shadow Slave, Dragon Ball, Bleach, Choujin X, Jagaaan, Hunter x Hunter, and many more series and when I see comments beneath videos I watch, they always say a power system is good mainly because of its complexity, but....I...
  17. MakBow

    Foreshadowing

    Simple, dopamine. Dopamine can make people forget the hints you laid out. So, with actions, you put consistent hints instead do one vague, otherwise, most people won't remember because they think about all the other maybe hype stuff and fun action seem in your novel, forgetting that hint and...
  18. MakBow

    Military Run Empire

    What would that look like exactly? I've been using a lot of my love for Warhammer40k in my side novel, since it will be a steampunk dystopian world where they hail the Iron-Blood Empire and the Golden Emperor of Humanity from the 3rd Epoch, where they make soldiers from the day they are born to...
  19. MakBow

    Foreshadowing

    That depends on the book. For action ones, the foreshadowing shouldn't be dragged out too much For mystery, the foreshadowing can be much longer than normal since it can be referenced a lot depending on the mystery of course. Overall, it depends on the genre, at least that's what I think
  20. MakBow

    Idea: My MC is treated like a Dog

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