I am currently practicing my endurance for faster writing speed and consistency.
I'm already pretty productive at around 1k per day. But I've been practicing 2k daily and hopefully, my goal is to get around 3k average, while also being able to grind around 5-10k in a single day if needed.
I'm...
It's not bad OP, in fact, you've done a better job than quite a few of the burgeoning authors I've seen on this website.
Good opening, decent hook. Though, the concept had been done before(reborn as a dragon)...
My genshin account got hacked right before hu tao banner, and my password was changed.
It took support three weeks to get it back for me and wouldn't even lock the account, the hacker spent 150$ worth of Primo I had saved up
Mihoyo did 0 compensation(wouldn't even revert the account), and...
Little bit of this little bit of that.
I plan "scenes"
I guess I don't write books, by telling myself this happens in this scene, rather I plan my "scenes" by planning the result of it. Does this scene convey character motivation? does it introduce a character? Is this scene simply for flavor...
Hmm I think the problem is that you are describe the affect of an action rather than the impact of it. A “show don’t tell” problem. Your writing perhaps feels dry because you are lacking “flavor”
for example, “xelios tossed the monster to the ground and it became splayed”
instead of
“heaving...
I used music as white noise, I prefer soft piano late at night.
I will say though, that music is good for figuring out certain moods you want a scene to have Hans zimmerman for action scenes or shounen music. And slower sad music for pondering and internal conflict
Op, I'm going to be honest with you.
Starting with, your chapters. You only have 10, most novels are going to be a slow growth until you reach a critical mass of popularity. You simply don't have enough chapters for readers to want to be invested.
Next description, put your update schedules on...
Some lizards can regenerate their tails. I believe octopi can do it to some extent as well. Humans can regenerate their livers as long as a few cells remain.
Eh I'm uploading daily but mostly because I'm a degen who writes fast but only when I have motivation. I can shuck out a 1k chapter in a little over an hour.