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  1. greyblob

    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    yeah i can tell bro. ai cover or just stealing a random nerd jp girl will work. boobs will ironically be a bad cover for your novel. despicable. will probably have more readers but despicable regardless. for thr multiple povs, i do not enjoy them at all. the max amount of charctaers i...
  2. greyblob

    sleeping on your back clogs your nose and causes sinus to flow down. bad for breathing among...

    sleeping on your back clogs your nose and causes sinus to flow down. bad for breathing among many other negatives. sleep on either sides, right is better if you can for kidney health. dont remember fully
  3. greyblob

    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    read up to: 30. Warning: Consequences this is gonna be a short one because i honestly don't have much to critique. overall, the writing is solid. structure is good, characters feel distinct. this is not my cup of tea but the writing is easy to read so i just kept reading and was honestly...
  4. greyblob

    nah im joking

    nah im joking
  5. greyblob

    my lawyers will be in contact

    my lawyers will be in contact
  6. greyblob

    I just realized. you stole my trademark

    I just realized. you stole my trademark
  7. greyblob

    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    its been two years since the last one and two more since the one before. im getting the itch again. i'll provide a simple review of what i read. I try to read more than the first few chapters before voicing an opinion which is why i have these few rules 0. NO AI OR AI ASSISTED CONTENT 1. No BL...
  8. greyblob

    Need helpful Criticism ❤️

    How is someone 7/20 black? how do we reach this fraction? this is not my cup of tea so i skimmed through the first 3 chapters. the writing quality is good but the writing itself is lacking. it lacks substance. the chapters i read suffer from a case of telling and not showing. you're telling me...
  9. greyblob

    sleepanda

    sleepanda
  10. greyblob

    im not blue. im not small

    im not blue. im not small
  11. greyblob

    About AI use in edits

    i'm not an english native either. for edits, the best advice i can give is read published novels. find a genre you like, download some books and read them. your writing will change drastically without you realizing it. for more concious work, its about patterns imo. you observe patterns and you...
  12. greyblob

    About AI use in edits

    wouldnt call this editing tbh. moreso rewriting. ai-assistance first draft has flaws but 2nd and 3rd change the feel completely. it went from silly to pretentious. Id say it elevated the the writing level, better composition, better vocab, yada yada but at the same time, it made it more...
  13. greyblob

    fraud

    fraud
  14. greyblob

    fake orc ceo

    fake orc ceo
  15. greyblob

    did you read orconomics?

    did you read orconomics?
  16. greyblob

    dont sleep on your back

    dont sleep on your back
  17. greyblob

    What would you do?

  18. greyblob

    huh?

    huh?
  19. greyblob

    Request tag "brainrot"

    isekai tag exists
  20. greyblob

    Anyone want a tarot card reading?

    thank you. this is kinda anti-climactic though. you just hit me with a clean your room bro
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