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im gonna prooompt. oh god im proooompting fyuuuuck

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I read the first 2 chapters. It's a good start. 1- Obviously your grasp on the language needs work. So try to study English as you continue forward. A litttle bit every day will go along way. 2- Your storytelling is better than most. You've got the right mentality but it needs polish. Try to...

dude is definitley not looking for reverse harems

i like to read harems without smut which does not apply to most works here. RR has some decent harem novels especially the old ones

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No. But I have a feeling you're lacking subtlety. I dont think this character is one to say brazzen sexual innuendoes. so flushed cheeks, a tremor, and elevated heart rate would fit better. her condition can be misunderstood by the guy for fear for an extra layer of comedy

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there was this vore novel i read years ago. it's about men being absorbed (from below) by centaur women. the men find it the ultimate pleasure and the centaurs get stronger or some shit.

berserk shouldn't even be on this poll. it's in a league of its own

I like this guy's stuff https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/55562/sexy-sect-babes https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/83080/sexy-steampunk-babes this has 1 character that's as you described the rest are fine https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/60032/alchimia-rex...

The first paragraph of the first chapter is arguablly the most important. If you cut the first part of this chapter out, i guarantee you would have found more success. It is what hooks the reader. What I read was exposition and descriptions that I cared very little about. My interest was peaked...