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My Little Pony best card game.

In psychological, you mix shock value and the unexpected elements of dreams and the subconscious to deepen the reader’s understanding of a character’s psyche. There are many others in this site who can do that better than me.

Would keep reading. Surprisingly good. Very genre-appropriate. The only thing holding it back is the inconsistent formatting and lackluster synopsis. This read like something @Hoshino would approve if he saw this. Our resident psychological expert. My advice is to add tags to your story for...

Wow, this is literally me.

I see u/AliceShiki123 everyday in r/gachagaming and r/umamusume :sweating_profusely:

https://myanimelist.net/manga/123397/Ou_no_Kemono__Enpei_no_Arcana The last book I read that isn't instructional.

Glad you like it. Macha is the one who stirred me to that direction. The original is very exposition heavy. You can choose to stop reading after three chapters, which is the first 10K words. But you keep going three times over. I appreciate that.

Noted. I want people to despise the MC so based on your feedback, I kind of succeeded? There is a reason she become known as a Demon Queen. It's refreshing to hear something harsh once in a while. The other people I asked about it only have good things to say about it. The Queen's English is...

It comes from the habit of rolling a natural 20 in DnD.

Rosica keeps giving strong advice. Is her advice strong because she is Rosica, or is she Rosica because her advice is strong? Best girl indeed. Anyway, here is my advice: Only ask for opinions from people you know and trust, then use everyone else to test whether it works.

Covers are displayed at smaller sizes in SH. I think cover 2 works better because it has a clear focal point. The close-up face fills most of the frame and the composition is tight, which helps it stand out in thumbnails.

I would like your unreliable opinion about this, RepresentingMenace. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2094923/i-am-not-a-demon-queen/

Rosica best girl confirmed.

That sounds like audience issues. Some people are just biased against non-native English speakers like that. I used to have the same problem. But then I realized there is nothing I can do to change how other people think. Their environment and experience shaped them into the people they are today.

*Steals your look*

Take a break from writing to refocus on bettering the quality of your life and community. What you are experiencing might be burn out. You will be surprised at how it also improve your writing when you decided to return.

It's the eight. (The poison is more potent than expected everybody died. Our immunity just make the death slower and more painful.)

Don't mistake my inaction as indecisiveness. It takes 5 seconds for the poison to kill the king and everyone else in the room. My family and community is immune.

*Country music starts.*