Search results

  1. Armored99

    What are the common and obscure types of 'Cheat System'? And how do they work?

    A cheat system is typically any system that gives a character an unfair advantage over others. This advantage can manifest itself in many ways, but they almost all relate to helping the character become more powerful faster than they really should be able to. Atleast the common ones act this...
  2. Armored99

    The Witch Of the Rock's Art Gallery

    tempting, but I'm too prideful to commission art for my story.
  3. Armored99

    The Witch Of the Rock's Art Gallery

    robot rat is cool, but I don't think rats live long enough for their robotic limbs to rust.
  4. Armored99

    How much do y'all care about realism in your stories?

    Logically speaking the example you gave is pretty realistic, the natural laws would have to be different to allow xanxia to work. What people are really trying to do when they make something more realistic is make it more immersive. Have the events that transpire make actual sense. There is a...
  5. Armored99

    Cut Lines thread

    'After a few dozen minutes of searching the oil has started drying out so we’re taking a break to reapply it.' Cut it because the MC isn't using the oil himself and wouldn't be the first to notice it. So another character needs to bring it up. not very interesting but something to add to the...
  6. Armored99

    Frog's Art Gallery

    Frodges
  7. Armored99

    Frog's Art Gallery

    thats cool, but I was expecting frogs.
  8. Armored99

    Punch paragraph

    You can't have a punchline be longer than a single sentence because the punchline exists as singular moment. If you punch someone and just keep your fist held in their face, you're not still punching them. However, you could set up multiple jokes and have their punchlines happen one after...
  9. Armored99

    Looking for Things to Review

    The videos you've made so far, outside of the lower production quality, do feel like ones you'd see from people with subscribers in the tens of thousands. Your channel is actually the smallest channel I've ever subscribed to. The smallest one I used to be subscribed too had 50k, but now its at...
  10. Armored99

    How many words do you write a day?

    It really depends on how much research I need to do. I don't want to brush everything with "magic" or complete 'it is what it is' to fill out the story. For example I spent two hours yesterday reading articles on trees and mushrooms so I could write 500 words.
  11. Armored99

    Explain patriotism to me

    I am prideful of the shared values of my fellow countrymen. simple as
  12. Armored99

    Post Your Synopsis & Get Feedback

    Title: Apocalypse Survivor in a Fantasy World Synopsis: A man who's survived in a ruined world for over ten years finally makes a slip, and does so straight through a portal to another world. Trapped on a planet where the very laws of nature are fundamentally different. Follow him as he carves...
  13. Armored99

    How do I make #21 on trending but get LESS views?

    i've never used the trending tab to find something to read. I don't even know what kinda of person would use it. Just check the tags you like and see if anything new pops up.
  14. Armored99

    Small question

    you quoted Wikipedia for that, doesn't count, use a real dictionary.
  15. Armored99

    List some good god novels

    I meant specifically what you meant by this "the author has no idea what the definition of a god is"
  16. Armored99

    Small question

    Wet definition Covered or soaked with a liquid, such as water. Cover definition To place something upon or over, so as to protect or conceal. Liquid definition The state of matter in which a substance exhibits a characteristic readiness to flow and little or no tendency to disperse, and is...
  17. Armored99

    Cut Lines thread

    Here's an Idea I cut, that I kinda regret because it's pretty interesting. Dryads have two political factions. One group eats meat because eating plants is cannibalistic. The other only eats plants, because they're protectors of the forest and killing to eat is counterproductive. Of course...
  18. Armored99

    Cut Lines thread

    If there's a thread for this please tell me. I searched but couldn't find one. Which is weird because I really thought there would be one of these on a forum for writing. (if there somehow isn't then this can be it) By cut lines I mean, Lines of dialogue, descriptions, or ideas that you removed...
Top