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I'll read it, but do note that the feedback you get is from the perspective of an average reader, I'm not much of a critic.

Oh, wanna fight?

Sorry, just felt like I had to add this.:blob_hide:

I'll go with sneezing. Coughing makes my throat sore, while at least with sneezing, there's this phantom sense of ease/relief.

Yeah, the translation issue has gotten even worse these days lol. Even if you use AI to translate, is just proofreading before you post a lot to ask??

Blame the big three of Korea, RPR. Regression, Possession, and Reincarnation. I don't know, but somehow, they replaced the word transmigration with possession. Sometimes too, the MC goes "I became possessed" like ngga you possessed this poor fella what the heck are you saying?

I'm glad I could be of help.:blob_highfive: Also, I'll say it again, don't skimp on the tags, I think there's a limit of 25 tags that can be used. And if you can, then fill all 25, as long as it's something that truly relates to the story. Most readers search what they want to read by tags, it...

Guess it's back when furries didn't equate to heresy.:blob_joy: Hell no, not the two girls one cup, I can't tell you how I once searched the name and somehow stumbled into the uncensored cover. Ughh, I'm still scarred to date. Yes, I do love hentai catgirls, and yes, I have no problem with...

I feel violated.

Not my Elvis, Elvis didn't look like he was trying very hard to look cool.

Not gonna lie, the MC in the middle looks somewhat middle-aged.

To be honest, I'm not a critic, and know very little about actual writing, and am still very much an amateur. But I'll say what attracted me, put me off, and generally, my first impression as a reader, so take this with a grain of salt. First of all, I think you should have given the...

Spent nearly three hours binging this thread, and wow, just wow, totally worth it. Tempokai, you devil, you ruthless crusher of dreams, do you know how many deleted novels were among the links I clicked? Damn. I'll make sure to feature you as a hard-to-be pleased eldritch god in the story I'm...

I think trends die out as fast as they appear. While a lot of readers were craving an isekai'd villain/extra/side character, it inevitably got to a point where the market was oversaturated, and suddenly, there's nothing else but that trope. Of course, I believe it's still somewhat persisting in...

Aye aye, Cap'n. :blob_salute: I'm very much aware of that.:blob_pat_sad: True. The pressure to make your work the next best thing isn't always necessarily good. And the reason a lot of authors dropped their works is because they went in with expectations which didn't later match the results...

Nine kowtows to you, Ancestor.?????????

I know little to nothing about nonfiction, but I think it depends on the contents of the report you're writing, and the potential audience of this report. If you can be sued for the content, or it might be offensive in any way, I think you can allude to the individuals by only adding the...

I get what you mean. When it comes to the sex scenes, it's supposed to have a valid why, or at least in one way or the other, be of use to the plot progression. But in your case, if the story is strong enough to disrupt the sex scene, I think it becomes a scenario where you describe what...

Very guilty at the onomatopoeia part. Wrote, deleted, rewrote, and deleted several times lol. The thing is, I actually planned to write brainless smut at the beginning, since for me I just wanted to flex my writing muscle and nothing more, but when it was time for it, I just couldn't immerse...

Ain't ready for kids yet, so definitely.:blob_salute::blob_salute: Thanks for the advice! I did dive into the smut itself without establishing the story itself.:blob_sweat: I guess the problem is the fact that I'm worrying.:blob_joy: Carefully...?