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  1. OokamiOkuri

    995 replies and still counting. It must be exhausting to keep the thread running in two sites...

    995 replies and still counting. It must be exhausting to keep the thread running in two sites. You have my respect.
  2. OokamiOkuri

    Have you tried Cincinatti chili?

    Have you tried Cincinatti chili?
  3. OokamiOkuri

    I always have the sarcasm tone whenever I speak. Sorry about that.

    I always have the sarcasm tone whenever I speak. Sorry about that.
  4. OokamiOkuri

    Just a normal day in St. Louise? That's good to hear. It's only 7 hours drive from Ohio.

    Just a normal day in St. Louise? That's good to hear. It's only 7 hours drive from Ohio.
  5. OokamiOkuri

    Anyone not registered 2019 is a clone.

    Anyone not registered 2019 is a clone.
  6. OokamiOkuri

    But most importantly: everyone is a clone of Tony and DCLXVI.

    But most importantly: everyone is a clone of Tony and DCLXVI.
  7. OokamiOkuri

    Their names start and end with O.

    Their names start and end with O.
  8. OokamiOkuri

    Are You Having a Bad Day? Do you want to talk about it?

    Are You Having a Bad Day? Do you want to talk about it?
  9. OokamiOkuri

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    It's just like what Zakuro and TheTrinary said. I used online tools to spot the flaws of your story after the first paragraph made me lost interest. The least I can do for you is that. Sorry if I can't be helpful. Call me a dick, but I don't see why this comment offends you. If anything...
  10. OokamiOkuri

    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Your story is suffering from: Comma splice Run on sentences and sentences fragment Repetitive sentences and paragraph structure Shifty tense This is how you avoid some of them.
  11. OokamiOkuri

    What to do if you cannot focus on writing?

    Do something else.
  12. OokamiOkuri

    Story feedback request about Cyberpunk2077 fanfic. Russiaboos pls respond.

    Mayonnaise.
  13. OokamiOkuri

    Don't worry, this post will be locked soon.

    Don't worry, this post will be locked soon.
  14. OokamiOkuri

    Justifying genocide

    Delusional.
  15. OokamiOkuri

    New author here.

    You can get away with daily releases but anything beyond 3 chapters per day and you're pretty much asking for the system to tag your story as spam and hide it from the main page.
  16. OokamiOkuri

    New author here.

    @SailusGebel this one seems to fit the criteria of what you're looking for. Check it out.
  17. OokamiOkuri

    [Poll] What is your relationship with forum signatures?

    You guys have a signature?
  18. OokamiOkuri

    Sounds like a Kungfu technique.

    Sounds like a Kungfu technique.
  19. OokamiOkuri

    When is a 1star rating justified

    Don't worry too much about them. Most people are fully aware that if you don't like a story, it doesn't necessarily mean it's bad. Personally, I even gave books I dropped 4-stars or more because the quality was there and well above average. If you rate something her 5 stars, doesn't that mean...
  20. OokamiOkuri

    There will also be people like @Zakuro who only appear when someone used an adverb and the...

    There will also be people like @Zakuro who only appear when someone used an adverb and the occasional @Mellohwa clones who made up the majority of this site.
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