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  1. Representing_Tromba

    I have a desire to do something probably borderline villainous involving invasive species of...

    I have a desire to do something probably borderline villainous involving invasive species of crab for ethical purposes. Anyone know of any invasive brackish/clear water crabs that are large enough to eat?
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    Did I Lose Anything?

    Sperate from the revisions, half the prayer is missing. Though the revised version flows better, it gives a less detailed image than before. I preferred the first but both are good.
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    Offering feedback on your first chapter

    This sounds like exactly what you're looking for! Finally! Let me know what you think. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/1165197/the-supernatural-case-of-an-accidental-time-traveler-volume-/
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    Trying to find an old novel

    Welcome back!
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    You are me and I am you.

    You are me and I am you.
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    Every time I sit down to write a new story idea, I realize that all I really want to write is...

    Every time I sit down to write a new story idea, I realize that all I really want to write is another version of Don Quitoxe in the modern day.
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    Stop it! No cold allowed. I am a southerners trapped in the midwest.

    Stop it! No cold allowed. I am a southerners trapped in the midwest.
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    Seeking Brutally Honest, No-Holds-Barred Feedback on My Book Cover

    Love everything about it! It feels like a classic scholastic adventure novel.
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    Would my story do better here than on RR?

    This isn't RR so probably.
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    When did you start writing?

    2014 but I didn't start sharing it until 2019.
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    What's wrong with that! I'll do some space drugs, put my hand in a weird box, and become a sand...

    What's wrong with that! I'll do some space drugs, put my hand in a weird box, and become a sand dictator if I have to.
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    [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?

    I do only make pocket change from but I could use the money.
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    [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?

    She does not need to for me. Friendly feedback is freely given.
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    :blob_cookie::blob_nom::blob_cookie:

    :blob_cookie::blob_nom::blob_cookie:
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    [Help me] As a reader, how cinematic do you think the fight scenes in this chapter?

    I understand what is going on but it feels like a Manga panel rather than a cinematic movie. It feels like a list of actions but that is a fairly easy fix since you have the whole fight already written. Just needs some melding in the editing process. :blob_salute:
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    Goose?

    Goose?
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    Duck

    Duck
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    I see. Why?

    I see. Why?
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    Why are the duck, cow, and question mark fighting? @Conqueror_Quack @JayMark @AnonUnlimited

    Why are the duck, cow, and question mark fighting? @Conqueror_Quack @JayMark @AnonUnlimited
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    What if the protagonist was a party member that was not kicked out of an elite group but instead was supportive of the banished member of the group?

    Sounds like one of the older underdog war stories my parents and grandparents read. Only the underdog got trained by a mentor figure to be better or enough to keep his team alive when it counted instead of being kicked out. So probably like that.
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