Seems like easy enough Yaoi if I'm reading this correctly. The reconnection might be a bit hard unless you already breath romance literature. If you do, looks solid for a premise although a bit short.
AI-chan needs some sleep deprivation. Not only does it give you more time to write, it makes your brain smoother to ignore the need for lengthy descriptions!
Would the visceral reactions of someone getting stabbed and thrashing while the perpetrator holds them close to keep jiggling the knife in em count as gore? I mean describing the heavy breathing, whimpering and body going limp.
Splurge on everything and declare bankruptcy by 20. Easy free money.
Ignore everything from school. Who needs numbers anymore and critical thinking now that you have never ending work.
Happy Birthday!
Too slow is boring. Remember that the first chapter is a hook and should be ignored by how purposefully flashy it is. Second chapter is how the rest of the story goes. Third is to confirm the tone and pacing of the second.
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Just about all that he has posted is supportive. One instance in 2023 where he was a prick and that's it. So, SaucyHug. How badly did you fuck up?
Bought to start shaming some of these comments. Started judging without looking into anything.
Riddick from the Riddick franchise. He is simply a murderer. If he just so happens to save the world in his selfishness, that is simply a bonus.
For a book I was making before hitting a wall: The motivation of the protagonist is helping enslave the world.
Briefly put:
He got a kid as a...