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It was always obvious to me that actions should be written in past tense, but thoughts in present tense (I mostly write in 3rd person tho) Example: "She threw a grenade and rolled under cover. However...this can't be? The grenade didn't explode!" But people were pointing this out as mistake...

I meant second 1

prose, too much dialog written like a text chat makes me roll my eyes

Just listen to attack on titan opening(guren no yumiya), supposedly it goes with literally everything

I like well thought out storylines with unreliable narration and multiple PoV where no one has plot armor and the genre is tragedy. I've read visual novels "higurashi no naku koro ni" and "umineko" a decade ago and haven't found anything quite this good ever since; including the later works by...

I tell not show all the time *dabs* every single writer forum has this thread at least once a month, and some people came to such proficiency in discussing this topic, that they reuse the same arguments through the means of copypasta

Why is Professional Pianist spelled in capital letters, is it litrpg and Professional Pianist is a class name?

oh, I watched that too. I liked how he started with description of a cover, which included the OO and led me to believe it's somewhat more obscene that it really turned out to be; disappointment followed

most of these "reason you suck" speeches only reveal stuff about the speaker, not the one who is being spoken about. basically, the person ranting lays down all the insecurities and jealousies and other nasty feelings they have been suppressing within themselves using their perception of another...

loop this for heavy parts

I love reading this thread, even though I haven't even read the fictions analyzed here.

keep commenting "amazing..." (don't forget the three dots) under every chapter and see how the authors rage and think you're passive aggressive

The hatred is making you powerful...it makes you stronger.....gather your anger and weaponize it! In time, all the silent readers will call you...master.

Read some stories, watch some anime, play some games, and brainstorm a lot. And then you will think "this is predictable, it would be cooler if the protagonist did what my speculah said instead" or "it would be more exciting if the plot took that direction instead! or "these characters are all...

A lot of drugs.

Someone pm'd me on another site few days ago, stating beyond the shadow of doubt, that they are most definitely not going to bother reading my novel past the first chapter; Then I saw them reading my recent chapter almost as soon as I uploaded it. It's surrealist, because until now, I thought...

check out my story then, it's a cultivation, but very far from "almost most" you described~ in fact I'm pretty sure I avoided or subverted all the tropes common to the genre

oh shit im in middle school! fuck yeah time to start the titty skittles early and befriend that one otaku girl I used to bully before I got into weeb media myself yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeah and also, sue my alcoholic abusive family to the court

listen to this on a loop and see what you produce!

create his own heaven, means, he's looking for hot springs?