"Hoshino wakes up after losing consciousness in an accident.
“Hello~ It’s time for your semen extraction <3"
So in this world... men are rare?! Women who are trying to seduce me and begging to be fucked... Since it's come to this, thank you for the meal!!!"
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Let me tell you something. Most new authors don't really meant it when they asked for feedbacks. They just want someone to read their stories. A self-promotion in any other name.
You are missing the part where you say "Can we talk in Discord? I have ideas to make your story better."