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It's quite good. I think you're slowing down because you released it in span of two days only. You can start to release more chapters regularly, your views would increase without a doubt.

You can only see it as an author. Go to Create and look at your story's stats.

China, India, and Russia all the way. After I visited those three countries, I hope to visit Iran, Japan, Georgia or Armenia, Vietnam, and Turkey. Tbh, i want to visit almost every Asia countries as long as it's not war-ridden.

I've read your story since early April. The greatest problem is, almost like what other had said above, that your fighting scene is far too long. There is nothing to invest about it, because readers don't really know what is this spell and attack that. It became much worse because you tried to...

Indeed. Though this is in writing story and alike context. After all, it's almost impossible for you to lose your English skill as long as you're connected to the internet. But too much of thing is of course bad for you. There are replies here saying their mother language skill is deteriorating...

English is my 2nd language, probably. Tbh, i only read english web novels back then, translations at first(from East Asia countries), then i continue to something like The Great Gatsby, 100 Years, etc. I barely read any literature in my mother language other than school texts. So it's obvious...

I always think that 11 pm is the best. Bored people/unable to sleep would try to reload the main page just for the sake of reloading it (I'm doing this rn). There are many US Americans in SH, so you can try to release it on their timezone. GMT +7 or GMT+8 is good too, because many asians here...

When in doubt, write smut

You're a warrior, making your friends be your smut story beta readers

Be horni and be good at writing smut. Though i usually never dare to reread my own smut cause it's too cringe

Mandala political system

Like what others said, people are not too familiar with merfolk and sea civilisation. In isekai and contemporary novel, you don't really need to establish the world so that readers can invest into it. But your story is different. How can i relate with legless humanoid people? What similarity do...

Long time ago, i was annoyed because i needed to login separately in NU and NUF. Now i understand the truth behind this. I'm annoyed no more :blob_thor::blob_thor::blobtaco::blobtaco:

You should read The Lazy King(in NU), it should be a good reference regarding 7 sins and virtues. anyway: wroth : fire gluttony : darkness, devour sloth : earth. In The Lazy King, their power are gravity and time, and so fucking great endurance pride : thunder greed : space lust : tree, as in...

I got the same offer from the same account and that Tynan guy just a few hours ago. Nonetheless i ignored it.

Wise words indeed

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