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  1. SakeVision

    nice bustboy pfp

    nice bustboy pfp
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    I dont

    I dont
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    Any sites like...

    novel updates and wuxiaworld for translated novels
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    Slurs

    call them sub-humans instead of demi-humans, that's what I do in my novel except I use the Chinese language term yaren/xiaren because it sounds better, like a pun!
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    Toilet thought: SEX!

    The best sex joke is when your best friend visits you dressed as Konata from Lucky Star and you have brosex as a joke
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    So, any thoughts on posting at Honeyfeed?

    damn, sounds awful
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    Toilet thoughts: busty boi/boy partial fetish.

    the op clearly has bowel problems. let's be understanding. they are mtfs on hrt in perma boymode because they can't pass as a woman and gave up on transitioning fully, but never stopped taking titty skittles and the results are what they are *knocks head* *think think*
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    How do you usually start your story? Why?

    But look: if we start with mc doing something stupid then we 1. Start the story in semi exciting way, with action... 2. Introduce the mc... 3. And have good way to characterize them when they are faced with failure or difficulty
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    How do you usually start your story? Why?

    mc doing something stupid and getting in trouble
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    Drug-Addicted MC

    every one of my mcs, in every one of my novels, is addicted to something. it's not a flaw, it's life
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    the moment a writer publishes their work publically, they open themselves up for a critique. And...

    the moment a writer publishes their work publically, they open themselves up for a critique. And your critique is 100x better than a random anonymous 0.5 star. they should be grateful.
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    You realize that your cat was secretly a dog…….. What do you do? Why? What?

    it doesn't behave like a dog tho, I am not convinced
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    critique this short story please.

    The feeling came and so have I ....and other weird phrases like these. I can see English isn't your first language, although the words you use aren't incorrect, the way they are used is very uncharacteristic for the English language. I'm not going to rewrite your entire work for you, but you...
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    What is the writing style of ‘So I'm a Spider, So What?’?

    It's stream of consciousness present tense 1st person pov, I write my trash novel in the same style
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    A message to the past

    None, because just as steins gate teaches us, sending messages to the past can have unforeseen consequences.
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    What do you, as a reader, like to see in a novel?

    A plot that makes me think Characters that are multidimensional Worldbuilding that feels real
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    Whats GL?

    Hmm, well no wonder they don't read it if it basically has none~
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