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I'm winning currently by waking up in 2am because of my body needed it

I'm winning currently by FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU- restart

I'm winning currently by watching police bodycam videos while in the bus while being hungry

I'm winning currently by waiting for a print to finish printing

I'm winning currently by drinking too much coffee

I'm winning currently by reporting 15 or so translations, with few of them having 100k+ views

Both. I'm winning currently by eating potato

I'm winning currently by drinking black kenyan tea with nothing else

Probably, yeah, given both are "autistsic", which I don't doubt, because this: But wow, if that was the author experience in some sort of way, given the Wayne Booth's implied author theory, I don't trust that author about writing 12 yo's slice of life story at all. Sure, kids can be weird, but...

But it was described in the same way as the pervert doing the same in 2000s manga but more graphically and over 10+ sentences for that, which elevated my disgust. I don't think I'll write anything about that webnovel as a roast anymore after a night of thinking lol

I'm winning currently by being late to work

12 yo stealing 8 yo's coat and having freaky smelling sessions of that coat. It's framed as something nostalgic and good for that 12 yo by narrator, but that's just either disgusting or just freaky if you look from the far away in the land of common sense. I thought that only can happen in...

I'm winning currently by reading something for a roast that is too freaky for me

I'm winning currently by standing in a rain for a few minutes for no reason

I lost, I just bought all the DLCs for Vampire Survivors

I'm winning currently by trying to not play video games today

I'm winning currently by resting for the third day and not feeling rested

I don't know if this would help you, but you need this: Your story has that mismatch. The premise and the progression is too logically wonky, that any surface work on sentences will not work unless you make the story itself stronger logically. It reads more like a practice run you'd make as a...

I'm winning currently by napping on the kitchen floor for 2 hours, making dumpling soup and earning 3$ from CS2

I'm winning currently by having 7 hours of sleep, which is not enough imo