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Ouch. Alright, first things first. You really need to re-write the synopsis or no one is going to take this very seriously. Multiple errors here, plus try to explain the story a little more. I'm worried to read anything else - and so will most readers.

I think the font is way too small and too bland. You need a font that fits your story, which appears to rely heavily on logic, formulaic equations, etc. Make it more, I don't know, science-like, I guess? ?

No, but she looks ready to kill him. ?

Hmm. Honestly, this depends on the overall length you plan for the book. You might need to take a little longer to "set the table", as it were, and that's okay, if the writing itself is flowing and the story is developing. It's not unusual to introduce a lot of characters gradually, as long as...

This might help:. People have experienced this problem before, due to a bug in the software, apparently. Go to the top of the file before starting a search, or enable "Wrap around". Double-check all options in the Find dialog box to ensure they match your intended search (case, whole word...

Well, I didn't want to hold up the game for the night-owls. :s_tongue: I think, shouldn't the guess "chocolate" cover anything made of chocolate? ? Unless it's not edible...?

Yay! Um, okay, I need to get to bed so, I'd better pass my turn to @pangmida ? ?

Shoes...?

Car tires....? ?

I'm rather pleased with the performance of my first attempt to create an erotic fantasy, with plenty of laughs and game-play. I think I succeeded at writing something Scribble Hub actually wants to see. (no furry stories, yay!) ...

Um.......luggage? ?

Rats, I thought I had it. *^^* Um... vinyl albums?

I honestly think you should start by re-writing your synopsis first and get people interested. Right now, it's vague, confusing and all over the place. ?

My wrist was really bothering me, but I slept with a heating pad on it all night and...poof, pain is gone. Sometimes, sleep and heat is all you need. :love:

Barbells?

oh! Dominoes?

How about a cord of some sort?

Technical but aesthetic....hmm.... How about a puzzle or something with pieces?

You won.

I have one!!! :love: But it has cookies inside.