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Well the guidelines have not been updated yet if Tony has planned a change.

Well, in all honesty, without knowing exactly what you are trying to write, it is hard to give you great suggestions. Is it some farm your MC is running? A brothel? Is it some weird take on an adventurer who, instead of killing the bosses of dungeons, captures them and makes them part of his...

I wouldn't say a fan, but I believe I read a few pieces years ago that were of Arabic origin. No, it is more along the lines that the eyes are said to be the window into someone's soul. Someone could be conventionally beautiful, but if their eyes don't seem to express anything, I don't find...

eyes for me... the right set of eyes, and I couldn't care less about the rest of the body, well, as long as she wasn't massively overweight.

there is the kicker. lol

It is disingenuous to shout out to something you haven't read yourself. I am writing. I don't have much reading time. I could shout out to @JayMark all day long, praising the cow gods godly steaks, but since I haven't had time to read anything he has wrote, that puts my own credibility in...

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When I read this, my initial reaction was, " You need to go find Jesus." Then I recalled I am a gooner, not a god-fearing individual, so let's see what we can do here. I assume this is for some monster girl webnovel. Something simple like Prolific Mother 100% chance of producing two...

Honestly... as both an Author and reader... You need to tell, you need to develop things... If I compared LN's to a North American equivalent, it would be Youth-Adult novels instead of something like High Fantasy. Edit (hit enter too soon) You should focus on worldbuilding and relationship...

It might get me to your main page at the very least, whether I take the next step and actually read would depend on tags and synopsis, but the shameless promotion of the.... wait, was this supposed to be your cover? Or just a quick thumbnail for something else? Either way, I might be tempted to...

For the love of all things... don't get old kids, it is a trap. Shoveled part of my driveway 2 days ago... my back is still on fire lol

You know all those videos all actors are 18+. At no point did I accuse you of being some Shota lover.

Stepmom, how did you get stuck behind the couch? *Zip* let me just help you out.

Wrong word, I was referring to this line. There were no screams, no limbs scattered, no sand soaked in blood. The dead fiends did not scream like the champions in the arena. I just whipped that up when contemplating how I was starting my next chapter. I didn't want to use scream twice in a...

I played with your scene a bit; not sure whether the fiends and the bandits were supposed to be the same thing. I don't like the champion's dialogue at all, but I left it in because it might make sense in your story. Also, I assumed you meant crouching behind a shield, not just raising an arm...

Sounds fine to me. It isn't too verbose, so your readers should be able to retain most of it without you having to repeat it later.

so... you are saying you are less humane and have a god complex?

Want a spicier one? Look at the Adult Visual Novel side. I would suggest Once In A Lifetime (complete) or Eternum (ongoing). Same creator. These AVNs/games are extremely well-written, especially considering they fall into the Eroge genre. They both have excellent world-building, character...

Heh, let's play this silly game. Is she a subbie goth, dommie goth, switchy goth? Let's say she is a switch, just so you get two/three things for the price of one. If she is tied, choked, being dommed, whatever, she produces milk for the next 24-72 hrs that has rejuvenating qualities and...