How did people wipe their ass in cities after shitting? We hear about using leaves in the wilds but nothing in the cities. And I do mean civilizations that are not the Romans. The community sponge is too easy of an answer.
Final Core: A holy dungeon something someting. by Razzmatazz
Starts building a tower instead of underground because it wants to ask the gods, why? Doesn't want to blindly kill but still makes the challenges difficult enough that people die repeatedly.
For the synopsis, This:
Before starting you would support me a lot by rating and commenting on my work without further ado, I thank you for your time
Immediately feels like you are demanding support in a weird way. A simple change of:
Before starting, if you would please support me by rating...
I might have messed up a bit. I haven't really read much of the "returner" genre. Barely knew it was even a thing. I can either read up on it or go full balls-to-the-wall off-road with the story. Who am I kidding? I'll just write in the genre blind!
Some stuff says bot. Other stuff says spanish translation. The tell tale signs of common direct translations mistakes like the first line of the synopsis.