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Every scene is different. I have a mixture of melee combat, magic combat, firearms, and even giant robots. If you are going to write it, it needs to be important, with stakes. If your MC or whoever you're focused on at the time, is just going to steamroll, you can gloss over that fairly...

/shrug It all depends on what you want. If you're not really 'feeling' the smut, then don't smut... fade any of the scenes to black, or maybe gloss over it. The only thing worse than fading to black is phoning it in. Poorly written smut ruins a book. Enjoy writing the story for what it is...

Because it's all first person and in chopped up sentences/paragraphs... This should be done mostly from third person, with only some of her thoughts in first person IMO... the way it is now makes it feel wooden...clinical even. Surrounding me again, the one holding me speaks in a joking tone...

That was the oddest 'sex' scene I think I have ever read. Was that spell like, auto ejaculate/zero refractory period/mind control for the guys or something? Cause... that isn't how that would work... unless you're like a queen succubus or something like that... (or whatever it's your book)...

I've been listening to a lot from these guys while writing. SynthWave stuff

I can't take my dog to the park because the ducks keep trying to bite him. I guess that's what I get for buying a pure bread dog.

Time skips, short scenes that advance the story, training time, maybe have a few scenes as relationships develop. Im kind of doing something similar right now, though my MC is faculty at the school, not a student. Unless your story's focus is academic life, time can rapidly progress now. You...

I wouldn't be overly concerned about the dropped.. Seriously, I have seen mine go up and down... It hovers near 50, but sometimes it goes down to 47 then up to 54... I think the dropped is either it isnt what they like, or they drop it from their list and might pick it up again later... Like...

is it a fanfiction? No Is what you're writing original and your own IP? Yes

Hehe, I had a similar thought. If they ARE fantasy races I see no issues, If you are worried about actual world racism, take a look at this post... I would say long as it isnt being glorified, you are fine. (1) Thoughts of putting racism in your works | Scribble Hub Forum

My dream job would be to clean mirrors. I could really see myself doing that

I would take that a step further, even. "Would I enjoy reading what I just wrote?" What I am referring to is stepping out of your self-bias and reading your work as if you just picked it up. Does it entertain you? Stimulate your brain in some way? Or do you actually find it boring or poorly...

did you paste as plain text by accident? Because that sounds like a plain text issue

well, you're a Futa lover... goes with the territory. But I think he was calling me a creep because I want to take uninterrupted naps... /shrug

I would see how long I could live in an Ikea before they start bringing exorcists in... It has everything you need, and if you decided you wanted to get a little chaotic evil... they have display toilets as well. /Whistles Innocently Edit We could take that further, I could drive a logging...

I want invisibility. To quote Red vs Blue yet again Simmons: I think I found where the Freelancers stored some of their equipment for their armor. Grif: Okay okay, stop. I'll just tell Sarge Simmons is doing something seriously fucking boring. Thanks. Simmons: The Freelancers all had A.I...

sure, it's always good to have bait- I mean welcome aboard partner.