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  1. SakeVision

    You have to join my discord server

    I really like this painting
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    what did you do to poor Alfredo

    what did you do to poor Alfredo
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    Sentence Structure Tip #1

    Maybe if he went all the way through it would have kept my attention. Why stop at the impetus of crescendo, the roll of drums, the crash of the cymbals, if you can also mention the echo of tubular bells, the gritting of the violin, the sharp pulls of biwa's strings, the thundering roar of...
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    How to write edge without being cringe about it

    That's one way to put it, but I liked it for cool fights, interesting plot, and electric batman. Never felt it particularly shocking, saddening, gory, or depressing.
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    god I love CabyBara Therapy

    god I love CabyBara Therapy
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    Sentence Structure Tip #1

    I ended up skimming that blue sentence, so you're doing something wrong.
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    How to write edge without being cringe about it

    Don't worry, I won't kill them. *creepy smile, edgy music* Tbh, I need to rewatch it, since it's been many years...but I never saw it as particularly dark or edgy, other than literal edges in the first opening.
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    How to write edge without being cringe about it

    You're really recommending darker than black to me?
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    How to write edge without being cringe about it

    "Who's the edgy boy? Who's the edgy boy?" *Dog wags tail* "Well, not you~" *kicks the dog away* Now that I have your attention, I wanted to have a shitpost in-depth discussion about how to make your readers genuinely shocked, mortified, and possibly suicidal. Through means other than going on...
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    Is all this just a waste of time?

    And slowly, you come to realize It's all as its should be You can only do so much.....
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    Anybody Play HOI4?

    Is this miedzymorze?
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    Do You Know About Thomas Carlyle?

    Do you know about Goethe? Do you know about Franz Kafka? Do you know about Dostoyevsky? Have you actually read Nietzsche and Carl Jung? Do you know Kantian ethics? Have you read anything by Marquis the Sade after whom sadism is named? You do? You do know about them? Congratulations, you are...
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    Sherlock holmes and his art hobby

    It's what we call writing for the public that has the attention span of a toddler and needs to be reminded of who is who and why every new case. The books were written for the lowest common denominator, and in such a way, that you can read any sherlock holmes story out of order and not be...
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    What exactly is considered couple growth?

    Couple growth is when your yandere realizes that she can't trust you, and advances your relationship to the next level of not letting you out of the basement.
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    How to Capture a Story?

    Well, to capture anything, you need to plan for a bit first. They say every war is decided before it breaks out, and so, you need to prepare appropriate industry and infrastructure in advance. On the strategic map, these are represented by factories and railways. But when it comes to...
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    Doubting yourself.

    same
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    myslef yourslef

    myslef yourslef
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    Writing Prompt [Boylove/straight] A naive relationship lead

    *Whips out a drill* You know the drill.
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    is the bear a catholic?

    is the bear a catholic?
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    same

    same
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