Overall First Impresion: You have an okay start. The prologue didn't work for me, and I think it will turn most readers away. There were some moments that kind of hit later on, though it feels like a predictably familiar plot moving at a fever dream pace once it gets going. (Take this with a...
No, you are the main character! You must save your sister from starvation and die tragically in the process while burning your precious violin to keep her warm ten minutes longer! Mwhahahahahahahahaha!