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  1. RebelLion

    Head-hopping in Eastern Literature

    The same reason why western literature consider one sentence paragraphs and floating dialogues bad. Because Western conventions treat them as breaking structural, grammatical, and formatting rules while Eastern traditions don’t see them as rule violations. Western literature values consistency.
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    I really need some advice about my novel

    My brother in Gathering Wives, look at Solon and ask, "How bad is the Jinzhou Arc?" Move forward to the next Arc and finish it. You can fix the earlier chapters after that and maybe add some foreshadowing for future events, like Yangyang being GA.
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    [IMG] @Louhi : salute to sepuh @Kazehiro : I'm not a sepuh Everyone : he is a sepuh! [IMG] GA ...

    @Louhi : salute to sepuh @Kazehiro : I'm not a sepuh Everyone : he is a sepuh! GA : all according to my keikaku Translator's notes : keikaku means plan.
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    Royal Road Forum Sucks Balls

    That's the work of the cabal. The worst part is the mods let the cabal get away with that because of the money they bring to the site. The average cabal members look like this: They wear bubble helmets to avoid breathing commoner air and command absolute authority, including summoning the...
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    Royal Road Forum Sucks Balls

    It's easier there because all you have to do to be rating bombed is breathe. No calling out AI stories required. As if they don't want to breathe the same air as us.
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    Royal Road Forum Sucks Balls

    The environment is so hostile everyone see another author as competitor.
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    Which is more unsettling?

    Would. Next question.
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    I can summon @Rosica so you can unlock another title, "Deceased."

    I can summon @Rosica so you can unlock another title, "Deceased."
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    Did uploading image on chapter could get my story get shadowbaned?

    The SEA datacenter is also under maintenance, they said.
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    [CLOSED] Unreliable Biased Feedback v3 (read the rules)

    Old enough to be friends with @Assurbanipal_II the third king of the Neo-Assyrian Empire from 883 to 859 BC.
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    Good girl.

    Good girl.
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    [IMG] The last thing you see after you criticize food estate and mbg.

    The last thing you see after you criticize food estate and mbg.
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    Makanan bergizi goyim (golongan orang yang ikut mulyono)

    Makanan bergizi goyim (golongan orang yang ikut mulyono)
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    Wassup I've been dating you in my head for 5 months Happy anniversary beautiful

    Wassup I've been dating you in my head for 5 months Happy anniversary beautiful
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    Who are the active users on the forums from your POV?

    Another Asian user here present. (Through blood transfusion) Some people thinks they are always Right because the other alternative is they are Left. You know how bad debates between Right and Left insisting the other side is wrong can be. Macha is from a communist country so she is always Left.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Perhaps you should consider putting a warning in the main page like what Sailus does in his thread to avoid misunderstandings. It let people know what to expect. Just a suggestion.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    The difference between being a dick and being honest is paper thin. It's a matter of perspective. Between me, Lloyd, and Kusa, I'm proud to say I'm the honest one. Your synopsis is clear and concise, and it gives a good overview of the main characters, the plot, and the tone of your story. It...
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    There are some good portal fantasy stories there that aren't LitRPG.

    There are some good portal fantasy stories there that aren't LitRPG.
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    Free First Chapter Feedback (V2)

    Three would not keep readings. Not bad. Keep it up guys and back to basic ratings will be a thing of the past.
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