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Ai-chan is both too busy and doesn't understand the poem enough to write anything.

Nobody can make anything perfect. Anyone who think what they made is perfect is being conceited. Even popular authors constantly improve and many would not reread their earlier published works because they were afraid they would be ashamed of what they wrote. There is an author here who wrote a...

Yes, both are real. Every day you start with homeroom meeting in the morning. Every class is assigned a homeroom teacher, chosen among the teaching staff. Sometimes the homeroom teacher may be away for one reason or another, in which case a junior teacher will be requested to take over homeroom...

- Is there a stigma against orphans/children who are adopted? Nothing organized. As in there is nothing in Japanese culture that persecutes adopted children. Adoption is actually quite common. However, kids can be cruel. So like every other place in the world, entitled children would be cruel to...

Authors should write and continue to improve their writing. Not checking where you're going and asking for author tips in artists forum is the wrong start, though. It shows you can't care less and don't bother doing your own research, which is a bad thing if you want to be a good author.

Not towards Ai-chan, but Ai-chan has seen this specific comment on literotica. Ai-chan got a different one.

Look on the bright side, at least they didn't leave scathing remarks about how you're 'a filthy evil imp who should have your dick removed and a red-hot metal pipe shoved up your ass' just because you have a few story elements that triggers them. Dropped stat? Easily ignored. But if you're...

How does a Male typically court a female? (Generic steps taken) Usually through a love letter, put into the girl's shoe locker, it's not locked. Or they will call the girl to an isolated spot while their friends cover the line. How does a female typically get the attention of the male they...

When half the page is filled with dialogue, that's too many dialogues. At this point, you need to start learning the concept of descriptive writing and applying it to your composition because if you have that many dialogues in the page, you clearly have not described the scene enough. It's not...

If you're talking about those scripted wrestling events such as WWE, it's hard for Ai-chan to say yes or no. Ai-chan can only say that Ai-chan doesn't know anyone who was interested in that kind of events. Ai-chan doesn't even know if there was such an event near us in Japan back then. There was...

He was found in his shorts and night shirt. There's a puddle of water on the mahogany floor under the body, and his shirt was a little moist where it touch or is near the wet floor. The blood on the knife has congealed by the time he's found.

Sweetloli is pretty much the fashion where the girl wears alot of lace and ribbons and act like a gentle, kind and naive fantasy European princess. Kawaiiloli is basically a fashion where the girl wears a lot of very cute clothes that more or less make people who look at them think, "She must be...

Yes, there are some cultures that students follow. The most common is gyaru culture. Followed closely behind by the death metal crowd (Ai-chan can't tell the difference between emo, goth, and punk) and gothloli. There are also other variation of loli culture such as sweetloli, kawaiiloli...

Modify the art so that the girl's pupils become heart-shaped. After all, it's not rape if the eyes... oh wait, do you have rape? If not, why not? Throw in some goblins! Having the whole face being the whole cover would be horrible, though. You shouldn't cover the character's face with text at...

Coffee. No one in Ai-chan's coffee club who have been drinking a cup of coffee since they were teens are balding or have cancer. The myth of restlessness has been a complete exaggeration. Ai-chan is not restless and Ai-chan drinks 2 cups a day, but instead of being super active or irritated...

Too much of a spoiler to explain, but Ai-chan can say that it involves the use of the air duct, a string and the very nature of the dead bolt itself.

It sounds reasonable on paper, Ai-chan will need to think about how it will work. But it won't be for this story. Ai-chan wants the first story to be simpler so that people can get into it easier. Let's face it, how many of us can remember the plot of a multi-chapter murder mystery? It will be...

Ai-chan feels like that's too much of a Japanese trope. When you're in pain and about to die, you won't be able to write the person's name. Sure you said he screwed it up, but Ai-chan didn't plan on doing this at first. But thinking again, it could be a source of conflict. Maybe he wants to say...

If Ai-chan's readers want the skirt to be blue, then it will be fucking blue! If the readers want the horse to have a purple ass and sings Californication, it will fucking happen! If Ai-chan's readers just want some flavour that doesn't change the plot much or if the plot itself has some leeway...