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i JUST said that i dont care. Kill them. Kill all the psychopaths. Damn psychopaths, polluting our gene pool.

I gotta be honest, chief. My eyes glazed over in the first paragraph. Something about psychopaths? I dont care, just kill them all.

...Megu. My precious, my light, my sweet child...you need to know when to stop. Holy fuck. Keep it to around 2-3k words per chap. Readers need time to digest, you know.

Do I...do i still continue that story? I know I've been neglecting it, among others.

fuck off, ya wee little cunt. This phone has lasted over 6 years on a single full charge. And at its current charge, it shall outlast you. (Im assuming you'll die of autoerotic asphyxiation soon)

:blob_teary: it's so beautiful...thank you.

So close, yet so far away...

:blob_cookie::blob_cookie::blob_cookie:

"i woke with my head feeling like someone drilled a hole in it and then proceeded to skull-fuck me." I mean, use whatever descriptive, colorful language you want. But like, its not anything that should take more than a sentence or two to convey?

not a damn thing, sir. Those are pterosaurs. And they are bulletproof. I shall pray to Allah and hope for a quick death

ah, i misread your previous replies them. But well then thats even more ridiculous then, because that's a power directly linked to the mind/will power and though willpower in itself is infinite, most people cannot achieve that. There are very clear limitations when it comes to any power directly...

i shall be the Dungeon of Minor Inconvenience. Stubbed toes. Trying to sneeze, but cant. You socks inexplicably starting to fall inside your shoe. Red lights everywhere, and you cant proceed until it turns green...and it takes forever to do so. All these and more....until I drive you slowly...

That's an entirely different power. Pyrokinesis is simply speeding up atoms to create fire. Gambit from Marvel's X men does something very similar to this. And at his full power, he can destroy planets. But he cant create anything. He cant turn you into a couch by rearranging your...

No, no really. You would control energy by speeding up atoms, but thats different from atom manipulation cuz you cant rearange them. You could basically blow up entire planets tho

I dont think you the sheer brokenness of Technokinesis. Telekinesis? Pfft. You can move stuff with your mind. Maybe destroy a mountain or two if you're powerful enough. but TECHNOKINESIS? Lol. Observe: Applications Crash! Cyberlingualism Data Manipulation Download Efficacy Manipulation...

by devouring other, more precious materials composed of the earth element. Gems, metals, things of that nature.

there's never any justification, it just says its rejected. For reference, this was the cover i wanted to use Now, fine, she's nakedfrom the waist down but you cant even see anything because of the shadow. So i say whoever rejected the cover is just a virgin prude. Unless its Tony himself who...

dude what the heck. We can't just GIVE you motivation to write. You're gonna have to suffer through the procrastination just like the rest of us, pal

There can be multiple main characters. Sub characters can be part of the main cast. Mobs, extras, those are the ones who arent important. It would be like killing off Zoro from One Piece

I mean...that's notanything hard to do. Just dont do any "see you later"s, you know? I mean sure you can do a few fake outs to trip the readers up. But a real surprise character death is just sudden and unexpected. When you think, "they are a main character, they wont die" and then they trigger...