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True. Tho One thing I dislike in erotica, usually in supernatural erotica, is that the love is ALMOST instant. Lust is the main driving factor, too. At almost the instant they meet, the guy is very protective, possesive and caring towards the female lead. Even if that's entirely out of character...

Hm? Yeah, surprised you recognized it from just the scene. Nice, this thanks for the feedback. I usually do sex scenes in third person cuz it's easier. First person I can do too and it may even be better for a sex scene cuz of the emotions but I dont prefer it.

Exactly this. A good sex scene, and erotica in general, isn't just about the sex. Its the feelings. People live vicariously through these stories, and they want intimacy. They want to feel loved, they want to feel cared for. And if you can make them feel that, then you did a good job. Smut can...

Nah there's been weirder stories. Ever read Happy Peach? That. That's weirder

Erotica is merely the evolved form of smut.

To me its not good smut unless you can accurately describe the way tongue-fucking a woman makes their toes curl. How they grab at your hair and push up against your face to take you deeper. Otherwise, is it even smut? Be dirty, vulgar, nasty. Let your Characters fuck each other into a coma...

Passion sounds like a good word for it, yeah

You arent wrong. Energy is just that: energy. It doesnt mean you are exactly cheerful or happy or even excited. It just means you got some stamina to burn. Filled to the brim with it. A bit over the top. People with energetic stutters are just talking too fast and stumble over words. So...

That "you" wasnt even directed at you, but used as a general term. Most people understand that given the context. How the fuck am I supposed to know what you write anyway?

yeah buddy, i dont have anything to prove to you. I'm a self publisher anyway. You wanna read my work? Gonna have to buy it A good smut story has to be a romance centric story. Because yeah, pure smut, sex scenes, wont sell well long term. And its probably not going to work well if you release...

easy to write? i mean its easy to me, but explain all these shitty sex scenes i see here if its really "easy". I am a man of quality, sir. Your crappy writing skills wont get my dick hard, know what i mean? EDIT the guy got mad at me for saying "your". Just to be clear, that was used as a...

:blob_aww: send me the money instead, i'll write you any kinda smut you want. Look, a small taste of my skill! Well? Well?! And to be honest i feel i coulda done that better.

See who they are affiliated with. If it's a company from Portugal, I wouldnt do it. Dreame, Swordstory and StaryWriting are all from that place and each of them are scams that just make you go through hoops to receive any money. Also ask how you would even be receiving payment, for example...

stop

some people do. i dont mind, but i never do. i prefer my stories to gain recognition on their own, so i don't often go out of my wayto tell people about them unless they're already reading other stories of mine. Its also cuz I'm a lazy cunt and cant be bothered

thats wack yo. I cant believe it really takes that long, i mean i always felt english was amongst the easiest of languages to learn. The only problems i think non-native speakers would encounter are things like it being TOO simple or having words that can fit anywhere and change the entire...

Woah. It takes you seven hours to write 2k? Bro I dont mean to sound rude but that's pretty dang slow. I take like an hour or two. Well, I dunno if you write it all in one sitting. I doubt you do. Probably have other things that take up your time

If that were the case this entire post would be invalid because that would make the 1st invincible. But no one ever says they learned all magic skill. What was that story? Everyone is a returnee except for me? Dude was.left stranded on Earth for year and learned every skill he could. Didnt...

...what's the average word count? Cuz anything over 4k and people dont want to read it. Personally I never really make chapters more than 2k long or so. Sometimes that goes over as I try to find a good stopping point. But yeah. People like shorter, easily and quickly readable chspters.

Gotta git gud I guess.