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I think my method of making rivers can be used to make roads too. Take a gray brush and lower its opacity while increasing the size a tiny bit and paint. After doing that, reduce it to the normal size while increasing the opacity a dozen or so %. It works great with rivers, and should be OK for...

Oi, Oi! You are going make people jealous of your SO with all this kindness.

I wish you strength. I just saw pictures from Catanduanes, and its ugly times for sure. I have lived through quite a few power outages in my life (ex-soviet republic, stuff happens), but none look as bad as your situation. Just don't forget to also charge up all laptops and power banks for extra...

Is it bad? I would expect folks/building managers to get generators if it was a common occurrence... Lives in danger? Edit: just read news... 16 dead thousands homeless.. Are you OK?

@HansTrondheim Awesome. If I were you, I would also add couple lone trees to gaps, so it doesn't feel as empty. But everyone has his own style. I also added grid to my first map, so I can tell the relative distance between cities in a glance. Since it was a realistic fantasy, it had to be done.

@HansTrondheim If I were to larp as a real fantasy map maker for a moment, I would be screaming "RIVERS DON'T SPLIT, ONLY MERGE! (with the exception of river deltas)", but I won't. Lovely work m8, if it conveys the world you wanted to build, its perfect!

Well, let me be a little shameless and post 2 maps I have done with Inkarnate. Perhaps it will give fellows some sense of what else they can do. https://i.ibb.co/gSz723V/crashed-into-fan-1.jpg https://i.ibb.co/s5bvnpT/Human-Tutorial-1.jpg First one turned out great (within my humble...

Hey @Tony I think there is a small issue with the website. When I F5 the /series/stats page, it looks like it doesn't dump the old info for some reason. I am no programmer, so can't tell you much except that if I refresh that part of the website a lot without closing the tab, it tends to use up...

Lads, there is no reason to over-complicate things. Just post the story you want to be reviewed, and review the latest posted story that happens to came before you.

Why not double personality!

@BenJepheneT This is the one for you.

Well, in my opinion, 2 things. Either a nice hook; such as a nice MC or 3d characters. Or, a promise of a world; a mystery or a grand adventure. But to tell the truth, in this website at least, good grammar.

The one you should review would be mine then :P

You have my halberd!

Better ask @Tony to make her official!

This novel is very easy to read, allowing one to kick back and relax. Most of the issues I managed to spot were small ones, such as 'hanging AT that axe of yours', 'There was no sign(s) that he had any sense of humor' and ' further up ahead should be THE group', or ones like ' Little did I know...

Well, yours is free. Take it as a perk of being first :) And even if the genres doesn't match, there are always ways t nitpick or praise a story. I'll read yours in a jiffy. For the next lovely member, here is mine: https://www.scribblehub.com/series/185681/the-ark-project/

Well, there are half a dozen threads where people post their stories to get some feedback or increase activity, but they all turn into graveyards where new stories are posted, only to be ignored. So, I am making this thread to try fix the issue with a rule: 1. Post your story. 2. Read at least...

For me, its the comments. I am myself the lurker type, so I get great joy when someone comments anything besides 'Thx for chap'. Whether its negative or positive, it still means that someone felt so passionate about my work that he/she took time to write something. I haven't said anything to him...

Ooohhh. Ain't she pretty. But well, considering the amount of smut stories here, she needs a bit more of a 'blush' in my opinion. COLOUR HER! Loving your work btw!