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  1. DominaterRaider

    My magic system feels right to me but I don't know if people feel the same about it

    There was one little thing I forgot to mention, the elements use a more god power then human created element less magic, My book is dealing with Greek gods sooooo yeah The color define it but the blast of the spell is more violent and bigger, Earth magic is used differently. if you were to...
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    My magic system feels right to me but I don't know if people feel the same about it

    My magic has a level and element system, the elements are more powerful then any other non magic like blood magic is strong but the pure water magic will soundly defeat blood magic even if it is a part of water in a way. The level goes to five and the color changes the more levels you go up...
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    “If you think I am going to be squirmy or queasy when I am flirted with then you need to go find yourself a boy,” Ash coldly shuts down Rin’s advances.
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    What is better a book about a contract killer or a superhuman genocide

    thanks I been working out the bios for each character and I have a lot more with the superheroes
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    What is better a book about a contract killer or a superhuman genocide

    sorry let me give a in depth question
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    What is better a book about a contract killer or a superhuman genocide

    I am trying to make up my mind on which one I should make first and how it should be done. Which one would make for a long lasting book, a superhuman uncovering a dark truth leading into some bad options or a contract killer who is well known but unknown. A weak super hero who has a difficult...
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    Looking for Things to Review

    Well I am a novice writer that makes a lot of mistakes but my novel is fantasy smashed into Greek gods. https://www.scribblehub.com/series/344483/the-light-and-dark-brothers/
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