Oh... thank you for revising my fiction's grammar. I haven't checked it yet... and I did consider fixing it, especially after noticing the inconsistent use of past and present tenses. 
But right now, my energy is being consumed by revising the narrative structure in the latest chapters. I'll include the grammar editing in the final revision after I've sorted out the other messes.
But right now, my energy is being consumed by revising the narrative structure in the latest chapters. I'll include the grammar editing in the final revision after I've sorted out the other messes.
