LuoirM

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  • LuoirM
    "I got a plan to get rich, but just like you, I find it not easy for us to live with our faith when morning comes. That's why we've existed since the dawn of time."
    LuoirM
    I'm vulnerable enough to tell y'all I'm depressed for internet attention, but egotistical enough to never want to talk about it.
    LuoirM
    ”Thinking back, I didn’t know how he got into college when he couldn’t even comprehend the fact that I got different genitals than him. There was this one time where he asked why I sit down whenever I pee in the bush and not just stand up like him, it was a very awkward and fascinating conversation.”
    LuoirM
    “When Jimmy went off to college, I was desperate and lonely… I was no one in this world without an anchor holding me down, sometimes I feel like I would float away into hell, it was… One of the most lonely times of my life, I could see him in the clouds, and when it rains, I feel him holding my hands, giggling like a little kid as he led me through the forest and hiding under this little bunker that someone built
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    LuoirM
    , probably there since the Cold War, there were some Switzerland MRE in it, hardly touched, but we never ate them.”
    Iamnotabot
    You can always talk to me lil bro
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    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    I've been suicidal, having existential crisis and horny recently, all three of which I don't think you're equipped to help since you... uhhh are mentally unsane
    Iamnotabot
    Iamnotabot
    Meh, i accept your praise. As for your thoughts, i think i can talk about them.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    I want to drop out of school and take on writing as a full time job
    The problem?

    I write suck
    LuoirM
    Is the format of

    [Narration text first here], "Dialogue here afterwards in the same paragraph"

    valid?
    I only saw AI do it
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    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    No, I've just been around LLM a lot lately and been too accustomed with its trend, one thing that it keeps pumping out is sentences structured like that

    It's actually ever only that or the basic normal "Text," [followed by narration]

    Never the
    "Text," [Narrate], "Text" which I loved and uses a lot
    melchi
    melchi
    The reason Ai-chan orders like that is because the more important stuff goes first.

    [Person talking #1] "Thing person says" [#2]

    It doesn't have to go that way, but if the dialogue goes first, and it isn't obvious who is talking until end then it makes the reading experience confusing and confused readers drop stories.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Huh, good point so basically, real authors are just good at making sure the readers knows who's talking, by using : at the end of the last paragraph, or using tones, niche stuff like speech patterns or context... But AI is less educated in that matter and have to do that? Because half-decent authors never have that problem of confusing readers
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    I'll start telling everyone that the love of my life passed away, I wanna see how far can I get until someone figures it out
    LuoirM
    If the mouth and the anus is connected then a threesome would be frotting.
    Azhurie_Mythephan
    Azhurie_Mythephan
    Intrusive thoughts are bad. Stop having them. Seek the romantic attention of a kind, loving woman immediately.
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    NOOOOOOOOO
    LuoirM
    Can't imagine how beautiful the world would be if Julius would just divorce Rochelle
    LuoirM
    Two of the most overrated arguments that I've seen people used that I can easily disprove are:

    1. The superhero no-kill rule (Batman, Superman, Daredevil, Spiderman...) are dumb and criminals will just do it again

    2. Goku can't beat One Piece verse because no Haki to penetrate Logia
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    Also I reread that a few times but still don't understand the asshole part
    NotaNuffian
    NotaNuffian
    @LuoirM I was being overly polite.

    But I think past me is trying to say that other than Batman's "kill a killer and number of killer remains" logic, is thetr any other thoughts on why superheroes not killing villains is good?
    LuoirM
    LuoirM
    Personal code of conduct, I, personally, would try my hardest never to hit a woman, just because I think it's a very cool code of conduct to have, even when she tortured and flay my beloved ones, I would probably not break my code of conduct... It's just, personal preference rather than a logical win and loss
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