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    About 5 or 6 paragraphs left to rewrite before Parallel Hearts: Ill-Fated Heart(Book 3) rewrite is finished. And god knows how long before the editing is finished. :blob_hmm:
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    There is another small detail that isn’t really paid much attention to. Though, main story wise. For the first three books.

    Book 1:

    The main is awake for 30 days. The time span is about a month.
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    In Book 1, their release, but not awakened lands them in what is the final legs of the war.

    Book 2, when they awake is after they are killed and sent between the living and the dead for the start of their trials.(They cannot truly live nor die).

    It is right when a purge is happening, and right before the weapon of the gods would come.
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    Hence they are awake for about 60 days.

    Book 3,

    They are brought to the surface in the final phases of a war. So while it is around 100 days they are on the surface, they regain their memories midway in.

    So it is roughly about 30 days give or take.
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    Aside from Book 1, which is their awakening at the end. What happens each time at the end? They go into a slumber. :blob_hide:
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    There are a few details not really thought about in my series. Though, almost all major battles are at night. Why?

    In the main series, the lead is strongest at night. The night is their domain, there are really just a few times you see a major battle in the day.

    In Book 5, 6, 7.

    Specifically Book 5, and 6. It became more like staple of the series to have the major battles at night, hence it acts as a reference
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    to the main. In Book 7 however. The protagonist of this one, is also strongest at night.

    As their path mirrors the lead of the series, eventually making them into the second Iconoclast in a thousand years. :blob_hide:

    This happened to line up given how it is a staple really. And the name of the book is Azure Night.
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    And on that note, all finales are done at night. If it is not night for the lead of series. This is when things get worse, as they will blanket the worlds in an eternal night for the duration. :blob_evil_two:

    The one exception, is the finale of the first book. When the main lifted the curse they set upon the worlds in the second half after they awakened.
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    On the update for Parallel Hearts: Ill-Fated Heart(Book 3).

    Concluding the first half which is the main antagonist. The second half leads up to the True Final Battle between the main and second main.

    Which was teased since the first book. The end of the first book puts a hold until the end of the third book. Hence, the second half of the third book’s finale picks up after the end of the first book.
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    Yeah, old me was like.

    “What is the best way to torture a reader? Oh I know, withhold the ending for two long books!” XD

    Yeah, needless to say. This structure cannot be changed. ?
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    Needless to say, while that part moved on. It later returned in a different way. In Azure Night.

    Which has a Normal End, True End, and EX True End. :blob_hide:

    Shoulda locked those behind DLC. :blob_hmm_two:
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    While Monster Hunter World is fun. It has a few issues that holds it back a lot.

    1. Confusing Map Layout.
    —> Does a terrible job at differentiation to find your way.

    2. Takes forever to track a monster.
    —> Bad design really.

    3. Countless holes in the story.

    4. It is horrendous with doing the Silent Protagonist, even more so than other games.

    5. Drags on a lot with nothing of substance.
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    Truckin’ With Val # 12

    Ya know, weapons, armors. They all need materials. So, how do we get it?

    Well, I have spotted the perfect one to make a nice solid hat.

    @Prince_Azmiran_Myrian

    Let’s get em folks. :blobspearpeek:
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    Truckin' With Val # 11

    Ya know folks, you ever just randomly start thinking of something hilarious? Well, I just had one of those moments.

    This happened back on RR a few years back. At the time I was on vacation in NJ. I didn't even see this until I got back.
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    And I think two months after I got back so it was a few months after the turn of the year. Anyway, I was notified of a thread. Where someone was insulting an old story I had up, and I think myself as well.
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    I remember them saying something like, there are so many chapter 1's. When not realizing this is divided into volumes. Just how I do things, each volume restarts at Chapter 1. As they are books.

    Continuing on, their ranting at me and my stuff actually gave my series a great boost. I wondered where the traffic came from on RR, and it pointed back to that thread. ?
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    Ya know, I think the only reason I haven’t bought Crisis Core Reunion, is because the voice acting is pretty bad. The scenes as well doesn’t look to carry the same weight.

    Sure, original was a bit clunky. Though, the voice acting was S tier that really sold the severity as it drew closer to the end.

    It made the scenes hold more weight.
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    Azure Night has reached its halfway point on SH. Time for the real fun to begin. :blobspearpeek:
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