My most underutilized writing skill is organ description. I am fairly good at making it sound grotesque as it look, but never really found a place to use them.
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At the moment of writing my MC is ripping a child's lower jaw away.
Idk if this apply to everywhere, but commiting open crime here is harder than you think.
The police isn't the main problem, the main threat is the people, they will jump you, dozen of civilians all laid upon you. The police has to catch yoh first, so you don't potentially die from being jumped.
Beside being a weeb, I am also a romaboo. I have an abundant knowledge about the Romans, especially after studying for a certain English degree.
Reading the whole history of the Roman Empire was very tiring, all thanks to my method of studying.
Back in high school, the class president was a drug dealer. Not the same group as me, since I'm just a delivery guy.
One of the most uderrated tokusatsu is Golden Knight Garo
I just noticed that you are also in the Naruto fanfic club.
Thank you for your encouraging words.
For any manhwa readers, you must've noticed that most MCs slowly begin to wear a black ir white trench coat at some point in the story.
Someone had called this the dokjafication, like carcification (evolve into crab).
Am I hallucinating because I see it.
I checked my insight for fun, I saw that I have one Israeli reader and I was like "bro wtf are you doing, there is a war going on."
Followed some of your suggestions and rewrote. Writing a demon is not easy.
I 'Herd' That you liked Organs so here is one.
It came to me in a dream, the ancestor of the Uzumaki is none other than Yujiro Hanma.
Today the Zen monastery I visited for a uni assignment put on rave music, while monks doing a podcast on the side of the road.
I can't even make this shit up.
People say economic is boring, but I enjoy it very much.
Today I learned the power of a Karen.
My cousin got pissed after the Popeyes got the wrong order, and was rude about it. So she called the headquarters, got an additional meal for free.
This is one of the main antagonists of my story. The Progenitor is one of his title
I think you don't need much help. You writing is pleasant to my eyes. I don't feel the need to skip like usually, which means you can hold my attention. It is structured. Sufficiently clear. The only thing you need to feat are narrative shortfalls, rather than technical ones. I wish your story good luck.
Rating 4.4 ... Seems unfairly low.
Your narrated time is pleasant to read.
Just saying black font in dark mode is hard to read. -
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