Adventure/Fantasy-story writers, how do you keep travel sequences interesting?

A question to prepare myself for future arcs. After >35 chapters, I'm about 90-something percent of the way through my first arc of my story, with almost all of it taking place in the beginning city and the area in, around, or under it.

Once the first arc's done, the main cast are set to leave the city proper and journey to another, where I plan on holding the second.

My question is this: for writers writing stories much like mine, how do you keep your traveling sequences interesting? Is it a matter of length? Proper exposition? Extended descriptions on any village your characters pass? Help

Follow the adventure premise of your story! Check out Majo no Tabi-Tabi and Frieren for references. Elaina travels from one city to another, following her mother's journey. Meanwhile, Frieren travels back to reminisce about adventures with her friends (most of whom are now deceased).

Eldoria said:

Follow the adventure premise of your story! Check out Majo no Tabi-Tabi and Frieren for references. Elaina travels from one city to another, following her mother's journey. Meanwhile, Frieren travels back to reminisce about adventures with her friends (most of whom are now deceased).

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Depending on the tone of your story, this works great.

However, if it's heavily character driven, you can treat it like a bottle episode. Its a great chance to explore your characters relationships and psyche, either through comedic road trip shenanigans or concerted introspection.

Following my fav murder types

Murders along the way.

Light exercises in between murder missions.

Lorelliad said:

A question to prepare myself for future arcs. After >35 chapters, I'm about 90-something percent of the way through my first arc of my story, with almost all of it taking place in the beginning city and the area in, around, or under it.

Once the first arc's done, the main cast are set to leave the city proper and journey to another, where I plan on holding the second.

My question is this: for writers writing stories much like mine, how do you keep your traveling sequences interesting? Is it a matter of length? Proper exposition? Extended descriptions on any village your characters pass? Help

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The "B-Plot" and the premise "Orks Attack"
Basically, stuff happens while the characters are travelling from point A to point B.
The world itself is a character (in a sense) and it responds to the things the characters do. (This is the basis of the premise of a "Living World", which I've gone into elsewhere).

But if you want to foreshadow some of it, maybe have the characters hear some rumors before they set out. You should also consider how far they are traveling, and the means by which they are traveling as well.

Erin M. Evans, and of course Tolkien, are exceptional authors to reference as well.

In my own series, I've used the travel-time between Point A (Saphria) and Point B (The Blackthorn Estate) to deliver, a fair amount of world-building, a decent amount of dialogue-driven LitRPG mechanics exposition, a flashback, character development, and a light conflict (battle encounter) to showcase several of those mechanics in-action, all on top of the existing plot-threads. [Ref: Duskfall Chapter 2]. All of which happened during (and immediately after) a flight that took (approximately) a couple of hours in-world time.

What matters, is the scope and purpose of the travel, and the events that happen during it. If it serves the narrative, then it belongs in the story. If it doesn't serve the narrative, then it doesn't belong in the story.

Unless you want everything to be in the service of a greater plot, look to episodic television shows like Rawhide or Star Trek or Wagon Train - shows that had most of the cast going from point A to point B either between episodes or during the course of an episode. See how it is done there - generally a page or two spent on the scenery, then "something happens" and a day or so passes, and then the characters are on the trail again.
A good literary reference would be the first two books in Wheel of Time - before the illness that took his life, and his ambition to tell not just A story but THE story, began conflicting and making Robert Jordan's work a bit chaotic and messy. He did some very good travel scenes (some captured well in the Amazon series, some not so much). C. S. Lewis's The Chronicles of Narnia also provide a good template to follow, as do the significantly shorter Chronicles of Prydian by Lloyd Alexander (The Book of Three, The Black Cauldron, The Castle of Llyr, Taran Wanderer, The High King)