Looking for thoughts on my wholesome slow-burn romcom with body-swapping

Sosin

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Hello, thanks for stopping by! I've been writing for a while now, and it's also been a while since I've come to a platform's forum. This is my first time on SH's, in fact.

Basically, my acquaintances aren't into romcoms, so the feedback I get is more on the quality side. That's great too, but I'm hoping people interested in the premise can share their thoughts on my latest story, Diaries of Kōji & Suzuka. Although a review, rating, or proper feedback would be nice, I'm mostly looking to hear your thoughts while you read a chapter, even if just a "this part was funny" or "meh" (preferably pointing at the moment you're referring to).

Any helpful comments are greatly appreciated!



SYNOPSIS
An impossible accident swaps Kōji’s and Suzuka’s bodies, forcing them to confront what they’ve been escaping. They slowly learn about each other and about themselves under scrutinizing eyes, but along with friends, too. Grades. Wealth. Reputation. Dreams. They must decide who they are and who they want to become. Together.
 

Eldoria

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Honestly... I'm confused by your question. What kind of feedback are you looking for?

If you're looking for feedback on taste, whether the story is funny, etc, you should ask your readers. They're the ones who enjoy your fiction.

If you ask other authors here, they'll likely dissect your manuscript technically, like analyzing grammar, prose, POV, pacing, etc.
 

Sosin

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Honestly... I'm confused by your question. What kind of feedback are you looking for?

If you're looking for feedback on taste, whether the story is funny, etc, you should ask your readers. They're the ones who enjoy your fiction.

If you ask other authors here, they'll likely dissect your manuscript technically, like analyzing grammar, prose, POV, pacing, etc.
I'm mostly looking for people who are into this kind of story (slow-burn romcom) to share their thoughts, since I don't know anyone else to ask. You could say it's like a beta read, but with the chapters already out :blob_sweat:
 
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