Critique me.

c37 said:

i would appreciate if someone critiques me and my book. I welcome any kind of criticism even roasting.
You can check it out here.

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Hans.Trondheim said:

Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but...

...just a heads up, the link you provided isn't working.

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Hans.Trondheim said:

Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but...

...just a heads up, the link you provided isn't working.

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c37 said:

Is isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it.

You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.

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c37 said:

Is isn't? Lemme check. Edit- fixed it.

You can link your story here, I'll read it when I am free.

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MC-Stories said:

I only read the synopsis, but already i'm impressed with the story, the sins of the fathers often cary to the son....

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c37 said:

i would appreciate if someone critiques me and my book. I welcome any kind of criticism even roasting. You can check it out here.

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c37 said:

Thank you, however i am struggling with few things since i am a new writer.

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Beast Heroes: Bianca’s Genisis

Follow the tale of Bianca Verdant, a 10 year old Awakened Beast Hero as she forges her legacy in a world filled with turmoil and Fear, her kndness and understanding being her greatest weapons as she deals the perks and responsibilities of being an 'Early Bloomer'

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Tales of Megacity-0

The City That Time Forgot, Megacity-0 was once a peaceful place, for both Awakened and Non-Awakened, but power can corrupt even the most noble, and it was only a matter of time before the city drowned in it's own blood! Listen to the tales of those who experienced this cruelty...

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Battle Of Megascity-0

Bloodshed, Pain, Suffering, this was the norm during the chaos during the Battle of Megacity-0 listen to the tales of those tired and failed to survive it as well as those who did. Survival of the Fittest was never like this.....

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Anonjohn20 said:

No smut. 0/10

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Hans.Trondheim said:

Not that I will read your story because right now, I'm trying to focus on writing my own but...

...just a heads up, the link you provided isn't working.

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c37 said:

Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence.

Damn cover art for your books look amazing.

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MC-Stories said:

I'm not really into smut, Maybe excessive violece and body horror, but that's it

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c37 said:

i would appreciate if someone critiques me.

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c37 said:

Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence.

Damn cover art for your books look amazing.

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Alski said:

Your name sounds like some deathrow inmate.

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c37 said:

Definitely not smut. Its more like slaneesh kind of stuff.

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c37 said:

Lol. I might include few sexual scenes in future due to a character and her influence.

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L1aei said:

Somebody mentioned Slaanesh?
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Eldoria said:

If you include that weird scene in your story, my parents will spank me. I'm just a fussy little girl.

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c37 said:

Slaneesh wants to know your location. *Happy degenerate noise*

Oh i might include more than that... btw can you review my book if you have some spare some time.

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HungrySheep said:

Why
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