Quickly, I need a chapter title!

Juia_Darkcrest said:

Chapter title

Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness

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Juia_Darkcrest said:

or

Cookin' With Lasers


Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new world he had found himself in, Battletech. His mech uses lasers and runs quite hot.

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Juia_Darkcrest said:

Chapter title

Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness

or

Cookin' With Lasers


Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new world he had found himself in, Battletech. His mech uses lasers and runs quite hot.

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L1aei said:

The sexual inuendo from that one... Jesus.



Yeah, I voted on the second one by default. You're gonna mislead readers if there isn't some sort of beef cake for them to drool over.

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Eldoria said:

A good title is one that doesn't misunderstand the reader. You get my point.

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Juia_Darkcrest said:

Chapter title

Lightly Basted With Sweat And Saltiness

or

Cookin' With Lasers


Context - My MC just had his first battle in this new world he had found himself in, Battletech. His mech uses lasers and runs quite hot.

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Bald-san said:

I think in your heart you already know the answer

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Corty said:

IMMA FIRIN MAH LAZOOOOOR

So of course, it's the second.

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Juia_Darkcrest said:

hahah i forgot that line!

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JayMark said:

Basted, salted.... cooking with lazers...

I don't accept your terminology!

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