Esden-Noir
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I've released my novel (again) recently after a rework I want people to actually see/read my novel. If you guys have the time please do read it. And I would greatly appreciate it if you guys gave any feedback. I mean "Any" feedback works. I've linked the story and gave the synopsis below.
Here is the synopsis:
In the shadowed veils of a world where demons stir in forgotten seals and mythical bloodlines burn with forbidden fire, Sylas is forged in the crucible of loss. Orphaned and adrift, he finds fleeting sanctuary in Mercy's embrace—a woman whose quiet compassion shields him and his steadfast friend Kael from the encroaching storm of war.
But when a ruthless decree from the Eclits Jurisprudence brands their haven heretical, horrors erupt that twist love into nightmare. Scarred in body and soul, Sylas awakens Omnimancy—a volatile magic that ignites only when one confronts the abyss, fueled by a vow etched in blood: revenge.
Guided by enigmatic captains of war like Ashrosa and the wry Esmeth Rowan, Sylas navigates treacherous factions, arcane enigmas, and visions of his own fractured self. In a realm where spells demand your essence and faith crumbles to dust, every alliance hides a dagger, and power exacts the ultimate toll: the soul itself. Can Sylas harness his forsaken legacy to defy the darkness, or will his quest unravel into a philanthropy born of rot—saving nothing while damning all?
The World Without Mercy is a pulse-racing dark fantasy of visceral magic, fractured bonds, and defiant fury—where heroes inherit ruin, and every strike echoes eternity. For readers who crave the intricate lore of The Stormlight Archive and the raw emotion of The Broken Earth, it's emotional, it's grand, and it feels real. this saga seizes the imagination and refuses to let go.
Book link:
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Here is the synopsis:
In the shadowed veils of a world where demons stir in forgotten seals and mythical bloodlines burn with forbidden fire, Sylas is forged in the crucible of loss. Orphaned and adrift, he finds fleeting sanctuary in Mercy's embrace—a woman whose quiet compassion shields him and his steadfast friend Kael from the encroaching storm of war.
But when a ruthless decree from the Eclits Jurisprudence brands their haven heretical, horrors erupt that twist love into nightmare. Scarred in body and soul, Sylas awakens Omnimancy—a volatile magic that ignites only when one confronts the abyss, fueled by a vow etched in blood: revenge.
Guided by enigmatic captains of war like Ashrosa and the wry Esmeth Rowan, Sylas navigates treacherous factions, arcane enigmas, and visions of his own fractured self. In a realm where spells demand your essence and faith crumbles to dust, every alliance hides a dagger, and power exacts the ultimate toll: the soul itself. Can Sylas harness his forsaken legacy to defy the darkness, or will his quest unravel into a philanthropy born of rot—saving nothing while damning all?
The World Without Mercy is a pulse-racing dark fantasy of visceral magic, fractured bonds, and defiant fury—where heroes inherit ruin, and every strike echoes eternity. For readers who crave the intricate lore of The Stormlight Archive and the raw emotion of The Broken Earth, it's emotional, it's grand, and it feels real. this saga seizes the imagination and refuses to let go.
Book link:
The World Without Mercy
Sylas was raised on a lie: love still exists. and warmth does not belong only to the burn of fire. grown up in the Orphanage of Faith, protected by the head nun—whose quiet compassion stands as the last fragile barrier against the Eclits Jurisprudence, a tyrannical order that descends...
