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The glossary would be perfect for it. You might have to specifiy in one of your chapters with A/N that it is there though as most people don't check out glossaries afaik.

I can't say whether or not it's better. In my own novel I use 3rd person for main mc and switch to first person for other cast member so the MC's voice never gets mixed up. My only advice is maybe add "Sofia POV" at the end of the chapter title so that readers know it's temporary. It's how I do...

I don't think it's complex. It seems like a simple escalation of power that can be directly translated to other generic systems like F-rank to S-rank, which isn't a bad thing. Does your story need a complex power system?

You’d be surprised at how dumb people are sometimes from teenagers to the mentally unwell. Also if they didn’t check then couldn’t it be used for illegal material. Full circle probably.

Prob side story imo. I think smut readers would be disoriented to suddenly having sex scenes with a different man as the lead. Unless of course you've made that clear but your tags doesn't have multiple POV or multiple protagonist. So it might risk alienating your current readers.

Short term, LLM would be your best bet i.e claude/chatgpt. It'll obviously lose nuances and things that make your writing you but if you want a readable experience for others then it's okay for that. Long term would be to learn English if you want to write in English. Read books, study grammar...

Yes it'll be okay. But don't let it stop you from learning more about the craft and more on how to advertise your webnovel. For example you need more tags i.e cute children, doting older brother, younger sisters. Weak protagonist if the brother will stay weak. Every little bit helps as long as...

I am curious what is a christian superpower? From a quick google I got this: Spiritual gifts, virtues, and divine enablement stemming from a relationship with God and the Holy Spirit, rather than comic-book abilities.

Your chapter 8 is a better reading experience than chapter 1. I think I remember reading your first chapter 1 unedited and this edited one is also a better reading experience. Whether it‘s over or under describing depends on the scene’s goal. If the scene is about sneaking past a bear, then...

Mix in the names of the characters and sometimes make the object the subject. He ate an apple. The apple was eaten. But yeah edit the chapter after is honestly the better way until it becomes instinctive. It's far easier to write down a scene choppily and expand than to do it perfectly in one try.

I wouldn't say litrpg's specifically more like webnovels in general. Another comparison would be pulp fiction publishers usually paid their writers by words and webnovels usually get paid by chapters i.e patreon or even webnovel where it's literal.

I haven't had a direct family member but rather a cousin, I won't go into detail but she's the reason I don't really interact with that side of my family anymore. Forgiving her isn't something I'd do but she does seem to have a mental illness. Even then no. My unprofessional advice would be to...

I'm sorry but I find that hilarious. It reminds me of the seinfeld episode where George gets tied up and robbed by a woman only to find 8$ in his pocket and the woman takes his clothes.

I have a contract with them and they don't have the rights of the author. Only that one story. The criteria for the 1500 words is for the win-win or mgs. You don't lose the contract if you don't post. I haven't posted in 2 years on one story and didn't lose the contract and was eligible for new...