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Hello! I finished reading your chapters! Here's my notes! Project: Psychic Chapter 1: First thing I notice technically, the paragraphs are doubly spaced apart, which isn't necessarily an issue, just an observation. Amy being described by a other person is a good choice, and it's pretty...

Hello there, thank you very much! I shall also get back to you! I'll try to get my reading done today! Alrighty, ask, and you shall receive! This was written on my phone, so my apologies for formatting mishaps. I've written it mostly as a reader rather than a critic. IN THE SEALS SHADOW...

Hell yeah! I'll give your chapters a read and get back to ya when I can!

Hello there, this is my introductory post, so I'll introduce myself... Hello, my name is Svary! Now that introductions are out of the way, I wanted to get some feedback on the story I'm writing, 'Fire and Light'. Here! The first chapter is pretty long, at 6500 words or so, but each...