Recent content by seavmun88

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    As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph?

    Hot take but it's not really a paragraph if it's just one or two sentences in an action scene or other quick things. Then it's just a line. Even three sentences is cutting it short unless they're compound. Tiktok kids that can't even read 3 sentences without losing focus? Good for them, have...
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    Anyone has tips on fantasy eco?

    Ditch the coins and just have the economy based on meat buns, duh
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    How to be funny and still be a good writer?

    Step 1: read Terry Pratchett Step 2: Congrats, you've read good writing that's funny
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    Multi-pov series synopsis. To name characters or to not name characters?

    Just make sure you do it in any way better than:
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    Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?

    smh, men will literally blame anybody but themselves for their fuck ups
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    Femdom mafia

    "Mexican mafia" is a really funny set of words you can only come up with if you've never actually been to Mexico. But whether it's a mafia or a cartel or whatever, they're only going to be "toying" with some random loser guy in a smut fantasy, so any "seriousness" don't matter. Look up what the...
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    Question for research; role reversal stories

    what the fuck kind of rape manifesto did i just read
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    What would you choose?

    hag time
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    Fandom feature gone?

    They should take the hint and not post the fanfics here anyymore
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    Seeking Hardboiled Critique: Does the atmosphere hit hard enough?

    If you're using AI to write your stories, you can use AI to review it too. Actual readers aren't going to be interested in any serious review of generic generated stuff.
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    Is hinting at SA done to child too much?

    It depends. If you depict it with full respect and sincerity and zero glorification or excuses, the answer is "yes". Any other way the the answer is "yes tf is wrong with you"
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    Suicide in Fiction

    ain't any need for suicide to be depicted. I'd rather see a rocks fall, everybody dies scenario. Suicide in stories are way too risky of being problematic for one reason or another. Ten times as much if it's an isekai protag who self-exits before getting their cool OP perfect new life in the...
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    Scammer artist tried to get me to commission cover art

    If anyone you don't know asks you to DM them on Discord out of the blue, they're always gonna be a scammer or worse.
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