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    Have you ever gotten stuck on a specific writing style?

    1st person narration can have its place, but it's also the first thing that most beginner writers use. It's way easier to get into a flow for that since you're not writing that different than how you'd talk about yourself. So getting into 3rd person can be a speed bump until you've gotten a hang...
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    How many levels of administrative division should an interstellar nation have?

    How much bureaucracy do you actually want to write about? Could be 50 levels of red tape and paperwork before you even consider single planets as entities, could be Space Emperor -> His Inner Circle -> Everybody else do your own thing as long as you meet tax quotas.
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    One Character Type I Hate & You Hate

    I can just smell the basement dweller vibes pouring off of this haha bro gonna be so pissed when he finally goes outside and sees androgynous people exist
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    As a reader, what is your attention span tolerance for the minimum and maximum number of sentences in a paragraph?

    Hot take but it's not really a paragraph if it's just one or two sentences in an action scene or other quick things. Then it's just a line. Even three sentences is cutting it short unless they're compound. Tiktok kids that can't even read 3 sentences without losing focus? Good for them, have...
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    Anyone has tips on fantasy eco?

    Ditch the coins and just have the economy based on meat buns, duh
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    How to be funny and still be a good writer?

    Step 1: read Terry Pratchett Step 2: Congrats, you've read good writing that's funny
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    Multi-pov series synopsis. To name characters or to not name characters?

    Just make sure you do it in any way better than:
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    Writing high-stakes fight... Am I good at doing it?

    smh, men will literally blame anybody but themselves for their fuck ups
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    Femdom mafia

    "Mexican mafia" is a really funny set of words you can only come up with if you've never actually been to Mexico. But whether it's a mafia or a cartel or whatever, they're only going to be "toying" with some random loser guy in a smut fantasy, so any "seriousness" don't matter. Look up what the...
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    Question for research; role reversal stories

    what the fuck kind of rape manifesto did i just read
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    What would you choose?

    hag time
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    Fandom feature gone?

    They should take the hint and not post the fanfics here anyymore
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    Seeking Hardboiled Critique: Does the atmosphere hit hard enough?

    If you're using AI to write your stories, you can use AI to review it too. Actual readers aren't going to be interested in any serious review of generic generated stuff.
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    Is hinting at SA done to child too much?

    It depends. If you depict it with full respect and sincerity and zero glorification or excuses, the answer is "yes". Any other way the the answer is "yes tf is wrong with you"
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    Suicide in Fiction

    ain't any need for suicide to be depicted. I'd rather see a rocks fall, everybody dies scenario. Suicide in stories are way too risky of being problematic for one reason or another. Ten times as much if it's an isekai protag who self-exits before getting their cool OP perfect new life in the...
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    Scammer artist tried to get me to commission cover art

    If anyone you don't know asks you to DM them on Discord out of the blue, they're always gonna be a scammer or worse.
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    Do authors want readers to point out spelling/typos in comments?

    Yeah becus speling is impotrant 🙏🙏🙏
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    Feedback for A Little Daughter Character

    1 No more than 5 at most 2 All the line breaks even in the middle of the same thing being described? It makes her sound like she keeps losing focus 3 Really cutesy but not really charming about it 4 Yeah it's pretty obvious stuff is going on she doesnt understand 5 It's not a bad premise 6 I...
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