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Basically this but targeted: (Will try to still assess which part is good though) FORMAT (Read carefully~) {using these means just...

Good day to you all. I need to know if the epilogue is readable (in terms of grammar), if there are enough descriptions, and if the...

:blob_hmm: Hmm, I cannot remember if I have asked for feedback here yet~. I usually always do, but I do not remember.

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:blob_hmm: Do threads have a search function?

Often a problem with fan-fics, instant audience but difficult for outsiders. Though outsiders may not be the intended audience. The...

I read two chapters, which in this case means I was lovingly volunteered to read what is essentially eight chapters smuggled across the...

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If you want to roast my work I’m completely open to it! My book is called Pharmakon and the basic premise is that the protagonist is...

a few members were angry that translations got more famous than their garbage novels so they launced this crusade. its a damn shame if...

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After reading your comprehensive feedback, I can say your answer is... Thank you for this excellent feedback. It gives me the...

For her age, the fact that she genders the river, the sun, the dog, and constantly repeats her name while not understanding death...

Dang, that's great character's POV subtext. It's very clear and pointed out to the plot subtext. It would be great to see from her...