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Yeah :/ sometimes Sometimes I don't translate phrases well, since I come from Spanish The confusing prologue is mostly intentional...

What a sizzling hot take that Mein Kampf is problematic.

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Machiavelli didn't even attempt a scheme. He was accused of conspiracy but still claimed his innocence under torture and was shortly...

Atlas Shrugged. The author genuinely believed that the wealthy could exist without ordinary people and prosper, instead of resorting to...

Just check out a bunch of other stories on this site. That should answer almost all your questions and make it obvious what you need to...

That's a French style of dialogue. I suspect the OP is French or influenced by French culture. :blob_melt:

Hey! I'm an amateur author, and I've never had a review of my story before. I'm trying to write something good and original. It's called...

Hi! Before we go on, keep in mind, I'm a very bad author. Treat any of my advices or opinions with care. With that out of the way: I...

I've read 5 of your chapters. Here are my honest impressions based on my reading experience. In general, your chapters have a smooth...

I've read OP's chapters and provided some feedback. I'm pretty sure this feedback is accurate and constructive. If OP could follow this...

I read your first chapter fully, and I don’t think your writing is bad at all. In fact, your descriptions and sensory details are quite...

Gasp! Sorry! Old habit! Yes, it should be "cover"!

It's called a "Cover". Don't teach him wrong, he's already copying you. Bad, Bimbanana. What "Poster"? Fucking hell. :blob_popcorn_two...

I have reviewed your work before, and I saw you made some positive changes, but there is still a lot of room for improvement. First...