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Behold..... The Devil Butchers. That's right. My first step for my project named "Project Storm" is a novel called "The Butchery Of...

I'm literally /here/ though! (laugh) I have always been here, though I do not post much in the other sections besides here! :blob_cookie:

Just don't take him somewhere shady like Discord and scam him.

"What happens to a person when the gap between the model and the market disappears?" Hey everyone, I’m J. Valmont. I’ve spent the last...

Synopsis should make potential readers curious about the story enough to click. At least make them care about the MC.

You can use the following synopsis formula (typically used in commercial novels): I've explained this formula too many times. The...

Dude... I'll be honest with you. Your chapter feels like a choppy cinematic film. As a reader, I had no trouble imagining the scenes in...

Hi, I'm looking for feedback on my latest chapter. Not on the plot/characters but more on the text itself, pacing (Scene-Summary) and if...

Thank you. This is a huge flaw in my writing. While I can't do much about the poster, I'll try to improve synopses to the best of my...

I can tell you that no matter how good your story is, your synopses doesn't leave a good first impression. The first paragraph tells us...

1. Your poster and title not engaging. 2. Your synopsis also bad. Like okay.... what the heck is malformed? what the heck is elite of...

Good day to you all. I hope you are doing great. My current story...

Dude, honestly... I'm having a hard time visualizing your scenes. Your narrative is full of verbs piled up in a compound sentence...

https://www.scribblehub.com/series/2204924/beast-heroes-roxys-rebirth/ I've improved the writing format, but i still want to see what...