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I see, i read your revised writing and Eldoria's suggestion. I'll cited some paragraph from your writing : And made some adjustment...

The tension suit better for action scene to be honest. And your writing on action scene actually become much more better!

I tried my hand at horror in this chapter and want to see how I carried the eeriness and horror. ch4 Aegis exhaled as he prepared...

Maybe a cocktail if it was in a fancier cup

Maybe it's Diamond Blue Cocktail :blob_hmm_two: :blob_hmm_two:

I’m afraid of my friend. She put matcha powder on pumpkin pie. Then poured water over it bc it’s dry, then like squished it across it to...

Well, hello! I'm back from the dead, and yes, it's been a while. This is my new account, after I deleted my old one in an effort to...

Dang, that's great character's POV subtext. It's very clear and pointed out to the plot subtext. It would be great to see from her...

This is nobledark, or rather, grim's fairy tale. A dark fantasy seen from a child's perspective.

Oh shit, what i understand about this, is it some kind of grimdark fantasy? The way she describe the 'Mr.Dog' dancing after her mom...

You sure?

The last warrior cometh.

They also represent their personalities, boy is more impulsive and the elf is more controlled.