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I like the way you play with color, you gave darker shades to distinguish 2 figures.

Since many people mistook my character for a girl I've re-drawn his design and added a few details.

Dude... after reading chapter 1 once, I noticed your narrative has a sudden POV shift problem that makes it prone to head hopping...

Wow this shit escalated really fast! Anyone need a coke? 4$ each.

Editor, former literary agent, and book publisher. *^^* We stopped publishing books after COVID however, as we were afraid of having...

The real tell is that they say they're a professional editor, and are from the UK. Clear shenanigans. No way they'd let any editor or...

Hey authors! I’m a seasoned book editor looking to connect with the Scribble Hub community. I know how hard it is to tell if your...

I see, is it too dramatic yes? Yes, i know this is not popular genre in here. But since it was my first writing, i'll keep this story...

You know how this reads to me, don’t you? But fine. If you want feedback, I’ll give you a brief one: -Cut down the melodrama. There is...

Indeed! You have great taste!

Ah, i see. Never thought about this. Because i'm still working on my action writing right now, maybe the hints i planted will be buried...

Simple, dopamine. Dopamine can make people forget the hints you laid out. So, with actions, you put consistent hints instead do one...

Foreshadowing is a creative author's way of engaging readers in predicting the direction of the story. Also, you can use foreshadowing...

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A variety works best, I think. You can foreshadow things in the same chapter for that quick payoff dopamine hit, you can have stuff in...